tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post113295864509166270..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Footsteps, Part 7-Final (Fiction)Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133302056587539932005-11-29T17:07:00.000-05:002005-11-29T17:07:00.000-05:00Robin, thank you! And thanks for visiting. Hope ...Robin, thank you! And thanks for visiting. Hope to see you often. I'm dropping in over at your blog now....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133293007042924902005-11-29T14:36:00.000-05:002005-11-29T14:36:00.000-05:00Loved it! Great job!Loved it! Great job!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06507129192655971640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133236476868745182005-11-28T22:54:00.000-05:002005-11-28T22:54:00.000-05:00Anne, thanks!Livewire, I'm very sorry about your a...Anne, thanks!<BR/><BR/>Livewire, I'm very sorry about your aunt. And I'm humbled if something I've written gave you some peace. My thoughts are with you and your family.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133154527237614022005-11-28T00:08:00.000-05:002005-11-28T00:08:00.000-05:00You know how I tell you that you always seem to ha...You know how I tell you that you always seem to have the 'right' thing to say? Well, my aunt passed away today and reading this, especially the end made me feel so much better. You have an incredible way with words. Wonderful ending for this piece.LiVEwiRehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10617307810655492590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133119259089814512005-11-27T14:20:00.000-05:002005-11-27T14:20:00.000-05:00Brilliant. :)Brilliant. :)annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08734374991569484126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133058228573468462005-11-26T21:23:00.000-05:002005-11-26T21:23:00.000-05:00Bernita, I'm afraid you have me pegged. Not much ...Bernita, I'm afraid you have me pegged. Not much a miracle man. Thanks for the compliments despite the disappointment!<BR/><BR/>Terri, yes, I do think Melissa is happier. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)<BR/><BR/>Farzad, I will definitely do another story. Just give me a little time for inspiration to strike. I appreciate all of your encouragement. It motivates me. And I'll be certain to check out those links you shared.<BR/><BR/>Kara, isn't it odd how these characters become quasi-real? I was genuinely sad when she died, especially for her mother left behind.<BR/><BR/>Jeff, thanks for the thumbs up!<BR/><BR/>Kelly, glad you liked the ending. I wasn't sure how it was going to be received.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133057709799021942005-11-26T21:15:00.000-05:002005-11-26T21:15:00.000-05:00Wow, Jason, a very satisfying ending. Great job!Wow, Jason, a very satisfying ending. Great job!Kelly (Lynn) Parrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04827605655761900263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133044374927677332005-11-26T17:32:00.000-05:002005-11-26T17:32:00.000-05:00jason- well done :)jason- well done :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133043369144008932005-11-26T17:16:00.000-05:002005-11-26T17:16:00.000-05:00Jason, great ending. It's happy yet still very ve...Jason, great ending. It's happy yet still very very creepy. I read this late last night and had to run to my bedroom because of a severe case of the heebie jeebies. It's great how you combined those two emotions (joy and fear). Awesome.Kara Alisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17382393133894023610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133041106437930742005-11-26T16:38:00.000-05:002005-11-26T16:38:00.000-05:00I didn't expect she's gonna die. I thought you mig...I didn't expect she's gonna die. I thought you might twist the story to another direction, but I was wrong again!<BR/>I wish you would have stretched it a bit longer, coz I really got hooked on this baby. <BR/>I can't really say that I'm glad it’s over! <BR/>Anyway, I'm gonna wait for another story... meaning, don't sit around doing nothing about it... meaning, write another one! <BR/>It seems like you gonna be a lawyer who is a writer too after all. And that by itself is a lifetime achievement. Well done Jason, well done! <BR/>I also got two links for you if you're interested to write a script for it and send it off. You never know, there are producers out there interested in new material.<BR/><BR/>http://www.inktip.com/scriptlog.php<BR/><BR/>http://www.asvw.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133027293703213582005-11-26T12:48:00.000-05:002005-11-26T12:48:00.000-05:00Beautiful! I didn't want her to die but now I'm g...Beautiful! I didn't want her to die but now I'm glad she did.<BR/>I'm sitting here with a goofy, "aaah!" smile on my face.<BR/>Really... beautiful.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133025100957247842005-11-26T12:11:00.000-05:002005-11-26T12:11:00.000-05:00Dammit, I wanted a miracle.I suppose this was the ...Dammit, I wanted a miracle.<BR/>I suppose this was the most your rationality would accept? This "come away, o human child?"<BR/>Nicely done though, Jason.<BR/>"The rich fields bellowed pollen.." is excellent.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1133022125353637892005-11-26T11:22:00.000-05:002005-11-26T11:22:00.000-05:00Mary Louisa, thank you. I had tear in my eyes whe...Mary Louisa, thank you. I had tear in my eyes when I wrote it. I'm not sure everyone will find the end satisfying, but I thought it was an interesting concept for Melissa's premonitions of death to be based on the very thing she's lost--her mobility and freedom.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1132968046572203752005-11-25T20:20:00.000-05:002005-11-25T20:20:00.000-05:00I have tears in my eyes. What great work you have...I have tears in my eyes. What great work you have done. I'll just pause and let it sink in for a while.Mary Louisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08974198919020077796noreply@blogger.com