tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post114580210441925574..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #7Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146499020305330432006-05-01T11:57:00.000-04:002006-05-01T11:57:00.000-04:00Erik, the image of the dark hall as he opens the d...Erik, the image of the dark hall as he opens the door is very vivid. Loved the "memory's shadow" line!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146082365778826092006-04-26T16:12:00.000-04:002006-04-26T16:12:00.000-04:00I thought of the Reeve movie too - so you had me a...I thought of the Reeve movie too - so you had me at the end. Very good! Was wondering why he didn't feel well! lol, excellent short story, 250 words does take precision. Keep up the great work, Lyndon (Entry #24)Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11998346902027037420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146062951976393802006-04-26T10:49:00.000-04:002006-04-26T10:49:00.000-04:00Erik, I liked this very much. It's amazing how sho...Erik, <BR/><BR/>I liked this very much. It's amazing how short and how difficult 250 can be, but even more amazing when you read a story like this that seems to naturally have no problem with meeting a word limitation. Just an excellent job.<BR/><BR/>-John Wilson.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14897384823687665242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145918024020209022006-04-24T18:33:00.000-04:002006-04-24T18:33:00.000-04:00This reminded me of the movie "Somewhere in Time" ...This reminded me of the movie "Somewhere in Time" with Christopher Reeves, so you took me by surprise with the ending. Very beautiful imagery.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145863538548147852006-04-24T03:25:00.000-04:002006-04-24T03:25:00.000-04:00Very powerful writing. The intrigue and the haunti...Very powerful writing. The intrigue and the haunting imagery is vivid. Nice work :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145814681906260592006-04-23T13:51:00.000-04:002006-04-23T13:51:00.000-04:00Jeff, Bernita, Robin,Thank you for such kind words...Jeff, Bernita, Robin,<BR/><BR/>Thank you for such kind words. They mean a lot to me.Erik Ivan Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05564245949077955844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145810201250212412006-04-23T12:36:00.000-04:002006-04-23T12:36:00.000-04:00Wow, very well done!Wow, very well done!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17517751302431903689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145808319168520342006-04-23T12:05:00.000-04:002006-04-23T12:05:00.000-04:00Foreshadowing foreshadowed. Fascinating applicatio...Foreshadowing foreshadowed. Fascinating application, Erik!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145803570942618492006-04-23T10:46:00.000-04:002006-04-23T10:46:00.000-04:00Physical and emotional longing. Great story, Erik....Physical and emotional longing. Great story, Erik. :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.com