tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post114599051251873360..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #20Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146540834338624992006-05-01T23:33:00.000-04:002006-05-01T23:33:00.000-04:00John, I liked the theme of splitting the lamps. P...John, I liked the theme of splitting the lamps. Precious together, and just as precious apart.<BR/><BR/>Good marks in enjoyment and storytelling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146240483637695982006-04-28T12:08:00.000-04:002006-04-28T12:08:00.000-04:00Thanks again,Kelly: good to hear from you again.Ho...Thanks again,<BR/><BR/>Kelly: good to hear from you again.<BR/>Hope everything is well with you and yours.<BR/><BR/>lyn: Appreciate the comments and your just too possessive (and you're right;)<BR/><BR/>sandra: That's very nice of you to say and I thank you for it.<BR/><BR/>bhaswati: Thank you very much and nice to meet you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14897384823687665242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146233372353571082006-04-28T10:09:00.000-04:002006-04-28T10:09:00.000-04:00Positive and uplifting. Despite a touch of melanch...Positive and uplifting. Despite a touch of melancholy, this story is about the spirit of hope. Nicely done :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146178072992760482006-04-27T18:47:00.000-04:002006-04-27T18:47:00.000-04:00Lovely story.Lovely story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146176292266489752006-04-27T18:18:00.000-04:002006-04-27T18:18:00.000-04:00Nicely done - the passing-the-beacon theme is a qu...Nicely done - the passing-the-beacon theme is a quaint metaphor and can become trite, but your scene has a gentle touch to it and is warm and satisfying. I liked how the sisters "watched memories play short, long ago scenes in our minds." Ha, finally beat Flood in commenting about a great line. :-) <BR/>One typo I think - last paragraph: "safety of each others rooms" is possessive. Well done. LyndonLynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11998346902027037420noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146069603499457452006-04-26T12:40:00.000-04:002006-04-26T12:40:00.000-04:00Good to see you here, John! Another beautiful sto...Good to see you here, John! Another beautiful story. =D<BR/><BR/>-Kelly from FMKelly (Lynn) Parrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04827605655761900263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146062031790509342006-04-26T10:33:00.000-04:002006-04-26T10:33:00.000-04:00Thank you all for commenting. I appreciate it.-Joh...Thank you all for commenting. I appreciate it.<BR/><BR/>-John.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14897384823687665242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146015750054504112006-04-25T21:42:00.000-04:002006-04-25T21:42:00.000-04:00I especially liked the last line!I especially liked the last line!Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17517751302431903689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1146000576116200102006-04-25T17:29:00.000-04:002006-04-25T17:29:00.000-04:00Touching story, John. :)Touching story, John. :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145994225209769402006-04-25T15:43:00.000-04:002006-04-25T15:43:00.000-04:00Concur with Erik.Concur with Erik.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1145993148754424572006-04-25T15:25:00.000-04:002006-04-25T15:25:00.000-04:00This is a very pleasing story. Felt good to read i...This is a very pleasing story. Felt good to read it.Erik Ivan Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05564245949077955844noreply@blogger.com