tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115111812113704709..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #16Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151950745359631072006-07-03T14:19:00.000-04:002006-07-03T14:19:00.000-04:00Congrats on 2nd place!!This was wonderful. The pe...Congrats on 2nd place!!<BR/><BR/>This was wonderful. The perfect union of a unique idea, strong writing, and strong voice. Also, you packed a great deal of story into a small space. Bravo!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151514459153955302006-06-28T13:07:00.000-04:002006-06-28T13:07:00.000-04:00Kind words; many thanks.Mob hit, Clint, haiku kill...Kind words; many thanks.<BR/>Mob hit, Clint, haiku killer.<BR/>She was fun to write.<BR/><BR/>John McAuleyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151498889359322122006-06-28T08:48:00.000-04:002006-06-28T08:48:00.000-04:00I love the way you've intertwined poetry with the ...I love the way you've intertwined poetry with the character and with the telling of the story! Well written!Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151328046955239122006-06-26T09:20:00.000-04:002006-06-26T09:20:00.000-04:00Heh, now that was poetic! ;-)Heh, now <I>that</I> was poetic! ;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151296221370697982006-06-26T00:30:00.000-04:002006-06-26T00:30:00.000-04:00Jee:jest being knotty here - I'd still stop to hel...Jee:<BR/><BR/>jest being knotty here - I'd still stop to help change tyres for a woman. I would have to be always behind her back, still.LOLs!chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151290781148763232006-06-25T22:59:00.000-04:002006-06-25T22:59:00.000-04:00I'll never believe another woman who tells me she ...I'll never believe another woman who tells me she has car trouble. lol <BR/>Good writing. :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151270328655986652006-06-25T17:18:00.000-04:002006-06-25T17:18:00.000-04:00I LOVE that the killer is a woman. Nice touch ther...I LOVE that the killer is a woman. Nice touch there.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151235457741804112006-06-25T07:37:00.000-04:002006-06-25T07:37:00.000-04:00Hmm. I'll have to watch out for creative writing ...Hmm. I'll have to watch out for creative writing teachers. Nice mix of poetry and fiction.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151209489442018212006-06-25T00:24:00.000-04:002006-06-25T00:24:00.000-04:00This is Choice Quality Shit, y'know?She's good, we...This is Choice Quality Shit, y'know?<BR/><BR/>She's good, we just didn't know it until it was over. The part about staring at my chest was the clue. <BR/><BR/>Damn fine work.For The Treeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843514742081569820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151204500938086002006-06-24T23:01:00.000-04:002006-06-24T23:01:00.000-04:00I agree. The unlikely combination of poetry and th...I agree. The unlikely combination of poetry and the underworld add to the originality of this piece. Enjoyed reading it.Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151202607459467522006-06-24T22:30:00.000-04:002006-06-24T22:30:00.000-04:00I love the twist of having a female hitman (hitper...I love the twist of having a female hitman (hitperson?).Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151178300723189642006-06-24T15:45:00.000-04:002006-06-24T15:45:00.000-04:00Nice bookending the story with poetry. I dug how ...Nice bookending the story with poetry. I dug how natural she felt doing her job.Anthony Rapinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581208296144295224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151162275712964422006-06-24T11:17:00.000-04:002006-06-24T11:17:00.000-04:00Fun to make the underworld poetic.Fun to make the underworld poetic.Floodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14341265651121116197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151147121493290502006-06-24T07:05:00.000-04:002006-06-24T07:05:00.000-04:00The poetry and the movie reference make the charac...The poetry and the movie reference make the character so natural. I love it. And I'd like to follow her story, which makes this like a really good appetizer!bekbekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935766604154823539noreply@blogger.com