tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115117933568702814..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #18Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1152768962195682042006-07-13T01:36:00.000-04:002006-07-13T01:36:00.000-04:00Jason: Thanks for a truly enjoyable journey ...wil...Jason: Thanks for a truly enjoyable journey ...will hop on the new train in August. I think you also can lecture on Time Management for Writers!:)chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151951027103368972006-07-03T14:23:00.000-04:002006-07-03T14:23:00.000-04:00Desi, the irony was interesting. Their trip toget...Desi, the irony was interesting. Their trip together is what sparked her desire to eventually leave him.<BR/><BR/>The story structure is very tight. Nicely done within the limit. High marks for entertainment and storytelling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151554147302562692006-06-29T00:09:00.000-04:002006-06-29T00:09:00.000-04:00gilbert: Oops, went back to your Road to search fo...gilbert: Oops, went back to your Road to search for the Positrons, you were not a late 'late'comer, just jlb! My misstake!chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151553706373445702006-06-29T00:01:00.000-04:002006-06-29T00:01:00.000-04:00jlb and klgilbert:WELCOME to 'latecomers' eh?jlb~~...jlb and klgilbert:<BR/><BR/>WELCOME to 'latecomers' eh?<BR/><BR/>jlb~~Twist is 'rite ...but the victim suffers for IT!<BR/><BR/>gilber:<BR/><BR/>"we lost an electron<BR/>on the midnight road..."<BR/>Now Desi will go around that road looking for Positrons!:) Good poetic treatment, but will <BR/>"Humans truly atone?" like on a electric cross, burnt to smithereens?chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151543469032154932006-06-28T21:11:00.000-04:002006-06-28T21:11:00.000-04:00This was a fascinating read. Would make a good sc...This was a fascinating read. Would make a good screenplay...with added words, of course. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151498755644155392006-06-28T08:45:00.000-04:002006-06-28T08:45:00.000-04:00Lovely twists of fate!Lovely twists of fate!Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151375652891993762006-06-26T22:34:00.000-04:002006-06-26T22:34:00.000-04:00Amra:thanks for APpreciation.At home here, "Vera" ...Amra:<BR/><BR/>thanks for APpreciation.<BR/>At home here, "Vera" is short for Veronica; at thy place, is it 'Verone'? Pls share, you never lnow I might have received "wlong" letter!:)chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151375516265152032006-06-26T22:31:00.000-04:002006-06-26T22:31:00.000-04:00jim:Been there at some point, yes, most of us, esp...jim:<BR/><BR/>Been there at some point, yes, most of us, esp sentimentalist writers! Jim, maybe we can exchange the details over drinks one day. Drop me a line at my Blogsite should you visit Malaysia.<BR/>The way I'm promoting NegaraKu, I must put a claim to Tourism M!:)chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151375358948669922006-06-26T22:29:00.000-04:002006-06-26T22:29:00.000-04:00scott :thanks for 'wyatt earp' backgrounding, i ha...scott :<BR/>thanks for 'wyatt earp' backgrounding, i had suspected it was one of those on Wanted lists! Hi, Bro, we share a common love of westerns then -- my fave is Shane, starring Alan Ladd, seen that one?<BR/>As for Doc, not too bad from the earlier version of what I saw in Gunfight at the OK Corral, he had the hot dames when he's HI (on his spirits!).<BR/><BR/>ON where I come from, pls Google malaysia mahathir mohamad george soros recalcitrant menacechong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151328398333700652006-06-26T09:26:00.000-04:002006-06-26T09:26:00.000-04:00A tale that cuts straight to the heart because we'...A tale that cuts straight to the heart because we've all, at some point, been there.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151321401295092332006-06-26T07:30:00.000-04:002006-06-26T07:30:00.000-04:00I answered your question on my blog, but in short,...I answered your question on my blog, but in short, no, my avatar is Wyatt Earp. I would have chosen Doc Holiday, but he was just too eerie looking.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151295765067434372006-06-26T00:22:00.000-04:002006-06-26T00:22:00.000-04:00jer:I believe it would, but it still hurts like ma...jer:<BR/>I believe it would, but it still hurts like mad. Have you been there to tell us as ITIS?chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151295641855390852006-06-26T00:20:00.000-04:002006-06-26T00:20:00.000-04:00dear INK:That's a gorgeous compliment, would even ...dear INK:<BR/>That's a gorgeous compliment, would even lift a lovelorn lad's spirits several notches. Thanks.chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151270571481810442006-06-25T17:22:00.000-04:002006-06-25T17:22:00.000-04:00Wonder if it hurt less that she left him for her G...Wonder if it hurt less that she left him for her God. Interesting. JerJerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151261135274233892006-06-25T14:45:00.000-04:002006-06-25T14:45:00.000-04:00Nicely done and quite unique from all the entries ...Nicely done and quite unique from all the entries i have read so far including my own. <BR/><BR/>INKcogKNEEdoughAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151244547719262002006-06-25T10:09:00.000-04:002006-06-25T10:09:00.000-04:00Scott: Is that truly "you" in that photo?It remind...Scott: Is that truly "you" in that photo?<BR/>It reminds me of some Great ... maybe we've met somewhere in dreamescape and exchanged some mindshare?<BR/><BR/>"THanks" to all guests, we are enjoying ourselves, yes!chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151244375064355832006-06-25T10:06:00.000-04:002006-06-25T10:06:00.000-04:00for the trees: Visited your forest; now thy wife h...for the trees: Visited your forest; now thy wife has joined in planting more trees eh? ENJOY and thanks for sharing.chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151244143850949452006-06-25T10:02:00.000-04:002006-06-25T10:02:00.000-04:00bhaswati:enjoyed your piece too; we try to relieve...bhaswati:<BR/><BR/>enjoyed your piece too; we try to relieve our tension with escapades like this sharing. Thanks for kind words, truly encouraged.chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151244054454695452006-06-25T10:00:00.000-04:002006-06-25T10:00:00.000-04:00flood: Being my virginal commenter, can I flood th...flood: Being my virginal commenter, can I flood thee with tehtarik, a Malaysian speciality tea!:) Rumour has IT it helps the libido! and loverlorn recovery.chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151236036996420902006-06-25T07:47:00.000-04:002006-06-25T07:47:00.000-04:00By nightfall I could have quoted every line. Love...By nightfall I could have quoted every line. Loved that. This is a great example of irony. Very well done.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151209910399168982006-06-25T00:31:00.000-04:002006-06-25T00:31:00.000-04:00Wow. She really DID leave him. Sad. But then, love...Wow. She really DID leave him. Sad. <BR/><BR/>But then, love lost is always the deepest hurt.For The Treeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843514742081569820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151204118790394042006-06-24T22:55:00.000-04:002006-06-24T22:55:00.000-04:00Nice interpretation of the image. I like the last ...Nice interpretation of the image. I like the last sentence. Thanks for sharing :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151188792008014992006-06-24T18:39:00.000-04:002006-06-24T18:39:00.000-04:00It is better to have loved and lost...It is better to have loved and lost...Floodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14341265651121116197noreply@blogger.com