tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115117984922956128..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #20Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151951571446002222006-07-03T14:32:00.000-04:002006-07-03T14:32:00.000-04:00Cesar, very intriguing and unique!! A high scorer...Cesar, very intriguing and unique!! A high scorer, especially in pacing, storytelling, and entertainment. I'm fascinated by the watcher.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151541004519811932006-06-28T20:30:00.000-04:002006-06-28T20:30:00.000-04:00Very very nice. What can I say.Very very nice. What can I say.Anthony Rapinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581208296144295224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151511491642453062006-06-28T12:18:00.000-04:002006-06-28T12:18:00.000-04:00Thanks Melly, Bhaswati, JLB and Anna for your wond...Thanks Melly, Bhaswati, JLB and Anna for your wonderful comments. It's comments like these which make me glad I participated. <BR/>All the best to you all!cesarcarloshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06521521008555753588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151510790526375682006-06-28T12:06:00.000-04:002006-06-28T12:06:00.000-04:00Excellent yet subtle use ofterror. You dragged us...Excellent yet subtle use of<BR/>terror. You dragged us right into<BR/>her head.annahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07274795863426882004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151501386044431862006-06-28T09:29:00.000-04:002006-06-28T09:29:00.000-04:00I really loved this one and the "inside looking ou...I really loved this one and the "inside looking out" elements of the story.Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151383028062900012006-06-27T00:37:00.000-04:002006-06-27T00:37:00.000-04:00I agree with Melly. The physical suffering has bee...I agree with Melly. The physical suffering has been portrayed so vividly, you almost feel it. I loved the element of the unknown/supernatural as well. All the best, Cesar!Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151289413118325782006-06-25T22:36:00.000-04:002006-06-25T22:36:00.000-04:00Beautifully done, César!It flowed with emotions an...Beautifully done, César!<BR/>It flowed with emotions and imagery. I almost felt myself as unable to speak...Mellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17461471128865537538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151287971065022232006-06-25T22:12:00.000-04:002006-06-25T22:12:00.000-04:00Thanks Jer, Scott and For The Trees for your comme...Thanks Jer, Scott and For The Trees for your comments. This is one of the parts I enjoy more when posting. <BR/><BR/>You can say this one is open for interpretation... death, a harbinger of something worse... or of something better. It' s always great to hear other POVs.<BR/><BR/>All the best.cesarcarloshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06521521008555753588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151280154573569232006-06-25T20:02:00.000-04:002006-06-25T20:02:00.000-04:00Excellent imagery.Excellent imagery.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151236491288960912006-06-25T07:54:00.000-04:002006-06-25T07:54:00.000-04:00I wonder if the man on the pole was death. Maybe ...I wonder if the man on the pole was death. Maybe she wanted him to come in.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151210231399023702006-06-25T00:37:00.000-04:002006-06-25T00:37:00.000-04:00Holy Cow!! This is truly great! The agony of being...Holy Cow!! This is truly great! The agony of being silent, and not by choice! <BR/><BR/>I wonder if the "man on the electric pole" was NOT gonna put her out of her misery...For The Treeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843514742081569820noreply@blogger.com