tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115124730848584169..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #25Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151951954875661952006-07-03T14:39:00.000-04:002006-07-03T14:39:00.000-04:00R.R., very effective twist! The description of hi...R.R., very effective twist! The description of him in the chair is very skilled. You keep the reader guessing. The reveal is very satisfying when the truth becomes clear! High marks for pacing, entertainment, and storytelling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151562012362989922006-06-29T02:20:00.000-04:002006-06-29T02:20:00.000-04:00thanks for all the nice comments all. Even more so...thanks for all the nice comments all. Even more so thank you for all the awesome stories which have led me to countless blogs, links,all over the place. THIS could get addicting in a hurry!<BR/><BR/>INKcogKNEEdoughbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151551342303611872006-06-28T23:22:00.000-04:002006-06-28T23:22:00.000-04:00Wow, that gave me goosebumps!! Excellent story.Wow, that gave me goosebumps!! Excellent story.christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00170119649259510290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151551308480680372006-06-28T23:21:00.000-04:002006-06-28T23:21:00.000-04:00BEAUTIFUL!BEAUTIFUL!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151502418143837012006-06-28T09:46:00.000-04:002006-06-28T09:46:00.000-04:00I love the way that this whole piece is sort of "c...I love the way that this whole piece is sort of "counting down."Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151410271370134402006-06-27T08:11:00.000-04:002006-06-27T08:11:00.000-04:00Agreed -- women are always right. That's why I bec...Agreed -- women are always right. That's why I became a leftist!chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151295799141250982006-06-26T00:23:00.000-04:002006-06-26T00:23:00.000-04:00Great twist. And good writing. Enjoyed reading thi...Great twist. And good writing. Enjoyed reading this.Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151283679118836102006-06-25T21:01:00.000-04:002006-06-25T21:01:00.000-04:00Cool concept. Sitting in the chair, thinking over...Cool concept. Sitting in the chair, thinking over his mistakes. Good stuff.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151280505597638652006-06-25T20:08:00.000-04:002006-06-25T20:08:00.000-04:00Excellent twist. Yeah, I liked it!Excellent twist. Yeah, I liked it!Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151262127902506222006-06-25T15:02:00.000-04:002006-06-25T15:02:00.000-04:00Hey, man, GOOD story!! Great twist! Nice POV. Keep...Hey, man, GOOD story!! Great twist! Nice POV. Keep this kind of stuff up and you'll get published for sure!For The Treeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14843514742081569820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151247629410481002006-06-25T11:00:00.000-04:002006-06-25T11:00:00.000-04:00"...and God I HATE when she is right!"Yeah, me too..."...and God I HATE when she is right!"<BR/><BR/>Yeah, me too.<BR/><BR/>Nice ending.Anthony Rapinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581208296144295224noreply@blogger.com