tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115137806373344226..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #35Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1152027238291672322006-07-04T11:33:00.000-04:002006-07-04T11:33:00.000-04:00Peter, I like the description of the journey viewe...Peter, I like the description of the journey viewed as what is still remaining, what is still wrong.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151455507175869652006-06-27T20:45:00.000-04:002006-06-27T20:45:00.000-04:00I so deeply identify with that need to just get as...I so deeply identify with that need to just get as far away from civilization as possible, that I was off in my own dreams of escaping when I came upon the end! :) Well done.Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151421538192783852006-06-27T11:18:00.000-04:002006-06-27T11:18:00.000-04:00Something tells me it ain't doubloons he's burying...Something tells me it ain't doubloons he's burying.<BR/><BR/>Nice job!mr. schprockhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16216294034597931274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151417845139099172006-06-27T10:17:00.000-04:002006-06-27T10:17:00.000-04:00This pulled me in and kept me pinned. I like the f...This pulled me in and kept me pinned. I like the full circle of title and last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151410658915186682006-06-27T08:17:00.000-04:002006-06-27T08:17:00.000-04:00I can see Joe Paschi being the narrator in this. ...I can see Joe Paschi being the narrator in this. Good job.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151383594714590562006-06-27T00:46:00.000-04:002006-06-27T00:46:00.000-04:00Nicely written. I felt as anxious about finding th...Nicely written. I felt as anxious about finding that <I>nowhere</I> as he was. Nice job!cesarcarloshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06521521008555753588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151382155555617422006-06-27T00:22:00.000-04:002006-06-27T00:22:00.000-04:00I'm with Bhaswati, I liked, "...I have yet to reac...I'm with Bhaswati, I liked, <I>"...I have yet to reach nowhere"</I>Floodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14341265651121116197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151381691733065312006-06-27T00:14:00.000-04:002006-06-27T00:14:00.000-04:00Chilling and compelling. I like the narrator's voi...Chilling and compelling. I like the narrator's voice, running away, and the imagery of the power lines on his journey to <I>nowhere</I>. Nice!Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.com