tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115142468817516124..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #39Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1152027683875831222006-07-04T11:41:00.000-04:002006-07-04T11:41:00.000-04:00Fran, the last two paragraphs really blew me away....Fran, the last two paragraphs really blew me away. Great description. Unique and strong. A great story idea.<BR/><BR/>High marks for entertainment and pacing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151559581200026812006-06-29T01:39:00.000-04:002006-06-29T01:39:00.000-04:00Great imagery! I love the line "It came and got hi...Great imagery! I love the line "It came and got him" and I also love, as others have said, the idea of his transformation into bits of energy.<BR/><BR/>Great writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151527673188462482006-06-28T16:47:00.000-04:002006-06-28T16:47:00.000-04:00Thanks, everyone! Roy, thanks for the correction. ...Thanks, everyone! <BR/><BR/>Roy, thanks for the correction. I'd never even heard of climbers before I wrote this, and wasn't sure if you needed more than one. Will remember this for future use!<BR/><BR/>Sue, I don't do poetry. I know my limitations (or at least that one). <BR/><BR/>Having read all the other stories for the Reader's Choice, I only wish I could do this writing thing as well as some other people on this site. But I'm grateful for the encouragement - especially from such a great group of writers and appreciative readers.Fran Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08177027484914337117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151513506804993972006-06-28T12:51:00.000-04:002006-06-28T12:51:00.000-04:00This was excellent. You did a lot with 250 words, ...This was excellent. You did a lot with 250 words, (or whatever you finally used.) Great ending. <BR/><BR/>Climbers is plural. I used to be a lineman for the phone co.Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13374537094067415065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151501298786273442006-06-28T09:28:00.000-04:002006-06-28T09:28:00.000-04:00This is a wonderfully-written piece. For some rea...This is a wonderfully-written piece. For some reason it got me lost on a memory of when the power cut out to my home in the woods years ago... when I called the power company, there was an automated message stating that there was "an animal caught in the powerlines." Oh how the mind does wander...Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151465728956509992006-06-27T23:35:00.000-04:002006-06-27T23:35:00.000-04:00Oh this is wonderful! I agree with the others--the...Oh this is wonderful! I agree with the others--the image of the man turing into raw energy is electrifying. Nice touch!Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151443322154348622006-06-27T17:22:00.000-04:002006-06-27T17:22:00.000-04:00The last two paragraphs had an almost lyrical qual...The last two paragraphs had an almost lyrical quality to them and could be transformed into a poem, if the author wished to do so.<BR/><BR/>Loved the consciousness is energy connection.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151441224188363502006-06-27T16:47:00.000-04:002006-06-27T16:47:00.000-04:00I loved the way you made the lineman turn into pur...I loved the way you made the lineman turn into pure energy...very ironic. Well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1151425574605022712006-06-27T12:26:00.000-04:002006-06-27T12:26:00.000-04:00Oh, I like!Oh, I like!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com