tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115638284454056663..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #11Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157592964869583272006-09-06T21:36:00.000-04:002006-09-06T21:36:00.000-04:00Well, he was a might bit fresh. Sleep tight, inde...Well, he was a might bit fresh. Sleep tight, indeed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157065432263300162006-08-31T19:03:00.000-04:002006-08-31T19:03:00.000-04:00That sent a shiver up my spine!I'm glad I'm not st...That sent a shiver up my spine!<BR/><BR/>I'm glad I'm not still in the dating game!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156728256541126232006-08-27T21:24:00.000-04:002006-08-27T21:24:00.000-04:00Thanks everyone for your comments. I love throwing...Thanks everyone for your comments. I love throwing twists at the end - maybe I watched too much Twilight Zone as a kid!<BR/><BR/>The woman reacted so well to the invite becasue she knew it was her chance to be rid of him. Why? Well, I think I'll have to expand on the 250 words and make it more detailed sometime. Sorry if I didn't make things very clear, but I really appreciate the input - only way to learn!Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03974515789515342285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156608233990365362006-08-26T12:03:00.000-04:002006-08-26T12:03:00.000-04:00Ouch, indeed! What a twist to end the story. Did g...Ouch, indeed! What a twist to end the story. Did give me a bit of a jolt all right. :PBhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156523378754600142006-08-25T12:29:00.000-04:002006-08-25T12:29:00.000-04:00Sam, a bit of a twist there! How conniving. I'm gl...Sam, a bit of a twist there! How conniving. I'm glad you enetered.Judehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121286194338647357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156473640356288322006-08-24T22:40:00.000-04:002006-08-24T22:40:00.000-04:00What ever happened to "not tonight dear, I have a ...What ever happened to "not tonight dear, I have a headache." I know...too mundane, and way too boring for an ending. <BR/><BR/>You are right...your way is better.<BR/>;DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156441316103568362006-08-24T13:41:00.000-04:002006-08-24T13:41:00.000-04:00Ouch! Love these twisty stories!totally unexpecte...Ouch! Love these twisty stories!<BR/>totally unexpected endingannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07274795863426882004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156434820968528722006-08-24T11:53:00.000-04:002006-08-24T11:53:00.000-04:00Wow, he must have been a real bastard to deserve s...Wow, he must have been a real bastard to deserve such a grisly demise. Loved the ending. Not nearly what I expected.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156433888731816292006-08-24T11:38:00.000-04:002006-08-24T11:38:00.000-04:00Note to self: keep dating engineers and cute day t...Note to self: keep dating engineers and cute day traders. Stay away from those with access to hypodermic needles. Yikes!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156431455203919892006-08-24T10:57:00.000-04:002006-08-24T10:57:00.000-04:00oh my. poor guy. Seems like breaking up with him w...oh my. poor guy. Seems like breaking up with him would have been more civilized than injecting him with something and leaving him out there to die.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156418480388902892006-08-24T07:21:00.000-04:002006-08-24T07:21:00.000-04:00Seems to me if she intended to off him, she wouldn...Seems to me if she intended to off him, she wouldn't choose this time.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156417439352691392006-08-24T07:03:00.000-04:002006-08-24T07:03:00.000-04:00Anne, it might. I honestly couldn't understand wh...Anne, it might. I honestly couldn't understand why she would have excitedly agreed to camp out with him and then react the way she did. Must be just my poor male brain...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156395647733121852006-08-24T01:00:00.000-04:002006-08-24T01:00:00.000-04:00Poor Ian. Nice job!Poor Ian. Nice job!Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156394089041629812006-08-24T00:34:00.000-04:002006-08-24T00:34:00.000-04:00Good readGood readAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156390560796284852006-08-23T23:36:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:36:00.000-04:00woo-hoo!! l laughed out loud -- but maybe that's...woo-hoo!! l laughed out loud -- but maybe that's just because i'm female. i have to wonder if gender makes for a different reaction! nicely done.anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156390379682146922006-08-23T23:32:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:32:00.000-04:00Very gripping story! However, it tends to lose its...Very gripping story! However, it tends to lose itself at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156389833443929432006-08-23T23:23:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:23:00.000-04:00Ha - It's funny because there's so much truth ther...Ha - It's funny because there's so much truth there. Nice one.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156385909903308262006-08-23T22:18:00.000-04:002006-08-23T22:18:00.000-04:00I love reading these stories. You cant get enough....I love reading these stories. You cant get enough.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com