tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115638404200353670..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #15Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157593242370277782006-09-06T21:40:00.000-04:002006-09-06T21:40:00.000-04:00The interraction of the girls rang true. I could ...The interraction of the girls rang true. I could feel the dirt in my hands. Good marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156758030548071802006-08-28T05:40:00.000-04:002006-08-28T05:40:00.000-04:00Excellent writing.Excellent writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156721054654387582006-08-27T19:24:00.000-04:002006-08-27T19:24:00.000-04:00Bekbek,Hah. Now I wish I had thought of that!Thank...Bekbek,<BR/><BR/>Hah. Now I wish I had thought of that!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the great feedback everyone. There are too many great shorts here. I am flattered that you took the time to comment on mine.<BR/><BR/>Cheers!Aleah Satohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16439351306951718500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156697230889731512006-08-27T12:47:00.000-04:002006-08-27T12:47:00.000-04:00I'm glad of the word limit. If you'd had more word...I'm glad of the word limit. If you'd had more words, you would have got to the part where she pulls up the really big jar of kimchee, and then I would have been laughing too hard to read the other stories.<BR/><BR/>All of a sudden I'm hungry for something spicy...<BR/><BR/>But in all seriousness, this is really nice. There's an air of... practical mystery. I like it.bekbekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935766604154823539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156610237830133922006-08-26T12:37:00.000-04:002006-08-26T12:37:00.000-04:00Unanimous, no doubt. What happens next? Do tell!Ve...Unanimous, no doubt. What happens next? Do tell!<BR/><BR/>Very absorbing read.Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156472541338610272006-08-24T22:22:00.000-04:002006-08-24T22:22:00.000-04:00It's unanimous...I want more, too.Good writing. I...It's unanimous...I want more, too.<BR/>Good writing. Interesting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156441513233372782006-08-24T13:45:00.000-04:002006-08-24T13:45:00.000-04:00Goodness. I am in a state here trying to figure o...Goodness. I am in a state here trying to figure out what Grannie's digging up.<BR/>You sure set that hook!<BR/>good readannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07274795863426882004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156435535497339842006-08-24T12:05:00.000-04:002006-08-24T12:05:00.000-04:00Ok, now I'm angry. I need to know what grandma is...Ok, now I'm angry. I need to know what grandma is digging up!Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156431134097404272006-08-24T10:52:00.000-04:002006-08-24T10:52:00.000-04:00You got me. What was she trying to show them? I li...You got me. What was she trying to show them? I liked this. I want more.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156429536195152702006-08-24T10:25:00.000-04:002006-08-24T10:25:00.000-04:00The title helped me to pull it together as well. I...The title helped me to pull it together as well. I wonder what she was digging up. Hope it wasn't poor Grandfather.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156426931751260662006-08-24T09:42:00.000-04:002006-08-24T09:42:00.000-04:00Thanks for the comments everyone. Bernita, I am gl...Thanks for the comments everyone. Bernita, I am glad you feel frustrated - that's what I was going for (simpatico with Jennifer's frustration).Aleah Satohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16439351306951718500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156425620413535622006-08-24T09:20:00.000-04:002006-08-24T09:20:00.000-04:00The title really helped me feel the message here.The title really helped me feel the message here.Floodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14341265651121116197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156422551295885562006-08-24T08:29:00.000-04:002006-08-24T08:29:00.000-04:00What does a novel-length story crammed into 250 wo...What does a novel-length story crammed into 250 words look like? So much more story here that cries out to be told. Just enough to whet our appetites...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156417678083992342006-08-24T07:07:00.000-04:002006-08-24T07:07:00.000-04:00Frustrating hints.Not enough.Frustrating hints.<BR/>Not enough.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156398651925481072006-08-24T01:50:00.000-04:002006-08-24T01:50:00.000-04:00Aleah, can I have some more please! (with wide eye...Aleah, can I have some more please! (with wide eyes, and bated breath)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156391532545322632006-08-23T23:52:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:52:00.000-04:00i loved this:"Grandmother began digging her finger...i loved this:<BR/><BR/>"Grandmother began digging her fingers into the ground, stopping every now and then to catch her breath and check on the girls who were silent. The only noise between the sounds of crippled fingers scraping dirt was the drops of water sliding off of leaves, sliding to the earth."<BR/><BR/>very nice!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156390714476819782006-08-23T23:38:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:38:00.000-04:00Very nice! I love the feel of this. So many ques...Very nice! I love the feel of this. So many questions, though!Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156389589812847022006-08-23T23:19:00.000-04:002006-08-23T23:19:00.000-04:00I want to read more too! Definite "ancient voices"...I want to read more too! Definite "ancient voices" feel here!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156386388132569452006-08-23T22:26:00.000-04:002006-08-23T22:26:00.000-04:00250 words keeps you hanging and wanting more. We ...250 words keeps you hanging and wanting more. We have Jason to blame for that. <BR/>Very interesting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com