tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115638418412153172..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #18Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157593540026926102006-09-06T21:45:00.000-04:002006-09-06T21:45:00.000-04:00Loved the end. Damn is right! It's not every day...Loved the end. Damn is right! It's not every day you get to see hell freezing over. High marks for pacing and technical use of language.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157078491169051762006-08-31T22:41:00.000-04:002006-08-31T22:41:00.000-04:00My pleasure, Amin. Thanks.My pleasure, Amin. Thanks.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157066413378367352006-08-31T19:20:00.000-04:002006-08-31T19:20:00.000-04:00Jer, just fantastic.What a fantastic piece of come...Jer, just fantastic.<BR/><BR/>What a fantastic piece of comedic logic - hell freezing over. Just great. After reading several dark stories on here this one, which sounded like it would be dark, really lit up my evening.<BR/><BR/>Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157033238481672212006-08-31T10:07:00.000-04:002006-08-31T10:07:00.000-04:00Thanks, Anne and BD. Don't you just love Jason's c...Thanks, Anne and BD. Don't you just love Jason's contests?Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157009607248547252006-08-31T03:33:00.000-04:002006-08-31T03:33:00.000-04:00I really enjoyed this Jer. Loved the light hearted...I really enjoyed this Jer. Loved the light heartedness of it. Thanks for the story.<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156969385988017202006-08-30T16:23:00.000-04:002006-08-30T16:23:00.000-04:00Oh I so love the last lines! :)Oh I so love the last lines! :)annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08734374991569484126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156874214318262922006-08-29T13:56:00.000-04:002006-08-29T13:56:00.000-04:00Thanks so much, Kelly and Wanderer. Am going down ...Thanks so much, Kelly and Wanderer. Am going down the list reading everyone else's and I've noticed a few other comedic turns. Love it. But I do think I'm the only one who turned the moon into a sun. Duh! What was I thinking? Guess I'll pretend I did it on purpose. Yeah, works for me.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156795862384843752006-08-28T16:11:00.000-04:002006-08-28T16:11:00.000-04:00One of the neatest little comedies I've read in a ...One of the neatest little comedies I've read in a long time.The Wandering Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05404559867270050616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156780294648159732006-08-28T11:51:00.000-04:002006-08-28T11:51:00.000-04:00Awesome dialogue, Jer! Good job!Awesome dialogue, Jer! Good job!Kelly (Lynn) Parrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04827605655761900263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156779019956728482006-08-28T11:30:00.000-04:002006-08-28T11:30:00.000-04:00My pleasure, Nicholas. Glad you enjoyed it. JerMy pleasure, Nicholas. Glad you enjoyed it. JerJerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156757840599168192006-08-28T05:37:00.000-04:002006-08-28T05:37:00.000-04:00This kind of humor is right up my alley. Thanks fo...This kind of humor is right up my alley. Thanks for bringing me a smile.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156726215403175932006-08-27T20:50:00.000-04:002006-08-27T20:50:00.000-04:00Thank you, Bhaswati and Bofire. Your comments made...Thank you, Bhaswati and Bofire. Your comments made my day.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156706331911564012006-08-27T15:18:00.000-04:002006-08-27T15:18:00.000-04:00You learn a lot about a person by reading their bl...You learn a lot about a person by reading their blog.<BR/>Your life and your writing appear to be interwoven.<BR/>Great story. Lighthearted but a lot of meaning. I enjoyed reading it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156688965511622732006-08-27T10:29:00.000-04:002006-08-27T10:29:00.000-04:00What a take on the image. You sure know how to tel...What a take on the image. You sure know how to tell an entertaining tale, Jer. What a pleasure it was reading this!Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156678115243892412006-08-27T07:28:00.000-04:002006-08-27T07:28:00.000-04:00Quite all right, Linda. I thought it was a cute co...Quite all right, Linda. I thought it was a cute comment on its own.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156656230487145462006-08-27T01:23:00.000-04:002006-08-27T01:23:00.000-04:00Sorry, I didn't finish my comment. I really liked...Sorry, I didn't finish my comment. <BR/> I really liked your story.<BR/>I liked the part "we never get clouds that look like cute little animals." That is why I said: Are we all running out to look at the sky. <BR/>I really need to read what I write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156631864048542372006-08-26T18:37:00.000-04:002006-08-26T18:37:00.000-04:00Thanks, Pheebs. Good to see you here. "Bitched his...Thanks, Pheebs. Good to see you here. "Bitched his hips" indeed. :)Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156609631516448302006-08-26T12:27:00.000-04:002006-08-26T12:27:00.000-04:00Jer,I didn't know to scroll down so I could leave ...Jer,<BR/><BR/>I didn't know to scroll down so I could leave a comment before. <BR/>Funny thing, when I read it the first time, my glasses were foggy I guess. I wondered why George "bitched his hips" <BR/>Two brothers with a special relationship. Very cool says pheebs.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156596493611686472006-08-26T08:48:00.000-04:002006-08-26T08:48:00.000-04:00Appreciate the comment, Lisa.Appreciate the comment, Lisa.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156565700909419902006-08-26T00:15:00.000-04:002006-08-26T00:15:00.000-04:00Very cute! Loved this one!! Wonderfully imaginativ...Very cute! Loved this one!! Wonderfully imaginative!Lisa Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16334253815212707025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156559395224818512006-08-25T22:29:00.000-04:002006-08-25T22:29:00.000-04:00Thanks, Deb and Bernita.Thanks, Deb and Bernita.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156543022888881402006-08-25T17:57:00.000-04:002006-08-25T17:57:00.000-04:00Cute and clever.Made me smile.Cute and clever.<BR/>Made me smile.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156540576337548842006-08-25T17:16:00.000-04:002006-08-25T17:16:00.000-04:00Great creativity Jer! Loved the story...you are a...Great creativity Jer! Loved the story...you are an awesome work of our Lord and Savior! Have a great day and keep those imaginative juices flowing...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156508960477017712006-08-25T08:29:00.000-04:002006-08-25T08:29:00.000-04:00Thanks, Joni. The only reason I knew a little Lati...Thanks, Joni. The only reason I knew a little Latin was that, even though I couldn't be an "altar boy" in those days, I helped train them. And I wanted to know what we were saying, so I did a little studying.Jerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156487462845393602006-08-25T02:31:00.000-04:002006-08-25T02:31:00.000-04:00Love the banter and the conclusion the boys come t...Love the banter and the conclusion the boys come to. I couldn't translate any latin origins at age twelve, nor do I think I could now. You've got me beat. Great story.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.com