tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115653792811717652..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #29Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157681917174383362006-09-07T22:18:00.000-04:002006-09-07T22:18:00.000-04:00An impressive mix of literary style with a grotesq...An impressive mix of literary style with a grotesque subject. It's terrifying how it hides the horrors. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157029502212319042006-08-31T09:05:00.000-04:002006-08-31T09:05:00.000-04:00thank you for reading and commenting.if it brought...thank you for reading and commenting.<BR/>if it brought a little perverse pleasure<BR/>than so be it.<BR/><BR/>aDafathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04786106615120535425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156694382624082352006-08-27T11:59:00.000-04:002006-08-27T11:59:00.000-04:00"Ironic detachment" is fantastic, especially in co..."Ironic detachment" is fantastic, especially in concert with the "little death." Long, long ago someone told me the "little death" was a Shakespearean orgasm. It fits the dark eroticism of your story to a "T."<BR/><BR/>I loved this.bekbekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935766604154823539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156655281175929362006-08-27T01:08:00.000-04:002006-08-27T01:08:00.000-04:00Okay I am a little slow, still reading and still t...Okay I am a little slow, still reading and still trying to understand. Obviously this is some lunatic that enjoys cutting off heads and feeding bodies to his dogs. Am I right or wrong?<BR/>I'll agree with the rest "darker than grey." I DID like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156568702207333442006-08-26T01:05:00.000-04:002006-08-26T01:05:00.000-04:00Understood, and loved it. Great piece of work. A m...Understood, and loved it. Great piece of work. A master piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156565517766448722006-08-26T00:11:00.000-04:002006-08-26T00:11:00.000-04:00I'm at a loss for words. A little too intense for ...I'm at a loss for words. A little too intense for me to fully understand.Lisa Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16334253815212707025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156561722554596762006-08-25T23:08:00.000-04:002006-08-25T23:08:00.000-04:00Wow. Ok. Almost too heavy on the descriptives, a...Wow. Ok. Almost too heavy on the descriptives, and this coming from someone who has abused adjectives and fancy words. I really enjoyed what you did with this one, the separate ideas and concepts you wove together here. It was just a lot of work to get through.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156547369898553562006-08-25T19:09:00.000-04:002006-08-25T19:09:00.000-04:00Somehow clinical, erotic and phychotic all in one....Somehow clinical, erotic and phychotic all in one. Much denser than I could ever accomplish. My praise for pushing the envelope.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156545152347322832006-08-25T18:32:00.000-04:002006-08-25T18:32:00.000-04:00wow.this is really a strange yet at the same time ...wow.<BR/><BR/><BR/>this is really a strange yet at the same time strangely wonderful piece. bernita was right when she said rich!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156544705471490302006-08-25T18:25:00.000-04:002006-08-25T18:25:00.000-04:00I can't say that I understood this piece entirely,...I can't say that I understood this piece entirely, but it is the mystery of it that makes it attractive. I loved the velvet darkness of it. Your use of language is inspiring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156541984963285442006-08-25T17:39:00.000-04:002006-08-25T17:39:00.000-04:00Very rich.Very rich.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.com