tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115656058173316175..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #35Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157682248301181262006-09-07T22:24:00.000-04:002006-09-07T22:24:00.000-04:00Wow. I really didn't expect that ending. An intr...Wow. I really didn't expect that ending. An intriguing moment--the creature hating its creator/tormentor.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156798526575386072006-08-28T16:55:00.000-04:002006-08-28T16:55:00.000-04:00I have to admit, I was starting to think the poem ...I have to admit, I was starting to think the poem was too much; an unwarrantedly harsh view of the moon. Then you explained <I>why</I> the view was too harsh, and it all fell into place. Nice, and unexpected.The Wandering Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05404559867270050616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156693902020361032006-08-27T11:51:00.000-04:002006-08-27T11:51:00.000-04:00Powerful writing. Kept me hooked all the way.Powerful writing. Kept me hooked all the way.Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156661543534007112006-08-27T02:52:00.000-04:002006-08-27T02:52:00.000-04:00I have to say it again, I love werewolf stories. ...I have to say it again, I love werewolf stories. Yours had an interesting twist to it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156624655063475242006-08-26T16:37:00.000-04:002006-08-26T16:37:00.000-04:00Awesome, Erik. It's good to know even werewolves f...Awesome, Erik. It's good to know even werewolves find catharsis in writing.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156599054020462502006-08-26T09:30:00.000-04:002006-08-26T09:30:00.000-04:00I kept thinking..."wow, what in the world has happ...I kept thinking..."wow, what in the world has happened to this guy to make him so bitter and angry?"<BR/>You succeeded in following one of the rules of short story writing...just when the reader is bursting with a question - you answer it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156595904807795012006-08-26T08:38:00.000-04:002006-08-26T08:38:00.000-04:00Original perspective. His anger comes alive throug...Original perspective. His anger comes alive through vivid descriptions. Great job.Lisa Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16334253815212707025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156581627575346232006-08-26T04:40:00.000-04:002006-08-26T04:40:00.000-04:00Don't read much about weres, but this sounds to me...Don't read much about weres, but this sounds to me like a strong and different take on the dark need POV.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156567729882225092006-08-26T00:48:00.000-04:002006-08-26T00:48:00.000-04:00you really captured his anger during transition. ...you really captured his anger during transition. this is one pissed off wolfman! <BR/><BR/>"You push against my rationale.<BR/>You ebb away my sanity."<BR/><BR/>very nice.anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156567350105318822006-08-26T00:42:00.000-04:002006-08-26T00:42:00.000-04:00Well written. Very good.Well written. Very good.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156563053776321082006-08-25T23:30:00.000-04:002006-08-25T23:30:00.000-04:00I loved this one. Wonderful perspective.I loved this one. Wonderful perspective.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156562699552973692006-08-25T23:24:00.000-04:002006-08-25T23:24:00.000-04:00Wow - so strong! I love the POV! I've never thou...Wow - so strong! I love the POV! I've never thought of a werewolf writing poetry about his condition. I love this.<BR/><BR/>"the yellow glow of a wart smothered whore"<BR/><BR/>ha, best line ever.<BR/><BR/>This truly is a great piece.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.com