tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115664560177842762..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #48Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157683513986471022006-09-07T22:45:00.000-04:002006-09-07T22:45:00.000-04:00The scene of him jumping into the water and holdin...The scene of him jumping into the water and holding her was expertly done. Very emotional with great impact. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157123935606867802006-09-01T11:18:00.000-04:002006-09-01T11:18:00.000-04:00Bernita- Thanks :) It was the first, and actually ...Bernita- Thanks :) It was the first, and actually the only solid idea that came to me when I saw the photo. <BR/>Your story was VERY good. :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157121022377858412006-09-01T10:30:00.000-04:002006-09-01T10:30:00.000-04:00Late, because Blogger wouldn't let me post at time...Late, because Blogger wouldn't let me post at times.<BR/>Sorry, Jeff. Had a longer comment too.<BR/>So nice to see a positive story. I liked this very much.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157066681685472312006-08-31T19:24:00.000-04:002006-08-31T19:24:00.000-04:00BD- Thank you very much. :)I really enjoyed your s...BD- Thank you very much. :)<BR/>I really enjoyed your story too.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157000690735268962006-08-31T01:04:00.000-04:002006-08-31T01:04:00.000-04:00Hey Jeff, EXCELLENT story! One of my favorites.BDHey Jeff, <BR/><BR/>EXCELLENT story! One of my favorites.<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156987163271596342006-08-30T21:19:00.000-04:002006-08-30T21:19:00.000-04:00Tang- I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your ...Tang- I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind compliment. :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156904756571706042006-08-29T22:25:00.000-04:002006-08-29T22:25:00.000-04:00wow... that was wonderful... true romance and love...wow... that was wonderful... true romance and love. i loved that!Tangasaurus Rexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06249290569454279017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156890807860590662006-08-29T18:33:00.000-04:002006-08-29T18:33:00.000-04:00Kathleen- I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :)Fr...Kathleen- I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :)<BR/><BR/>Fringes- Old cynic? No way! I'm pleased you found the story uplifting. Thanks :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156871158703511652006-08-29T13:05:00.000-04:002006-08-29T13:05:00.000-04:00I admit I was surprised by the ending as well. Upl...I admit I was surprised by the ending as well. Uplifting, even to an old cynic like me.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for visiting my blog today and for your kind words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156857260926138732006-08-29T09:14:00.000-04:002006-08-29T09:14:00.000-04:00Absolutely beautiful.Absolutely beautiful.Kathleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04399098868122212536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156818379727710572006-08-28T22:26:00.000-04:002006-08-28T22:26:00.000-04:00Jer- Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Are you pr...Jer- Thanks :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Are you proposing? lol<BR/><BR/>Kelly- Thank you. :)<BR/><BR/>Terri- That's so nice of you to say. Thanks :)<BR/><BR/>Bhaswati- You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)<BR/><BR/>Sandra- You're welcome, and thank you. :)<BR/><BR/>Joni- You're welcome! Thank you for your kind words. :)<BR/><BR/>Jaye- Thanks, I'm a sucker for happy endings too. :)<BR/><BR/>Scott- Sorry, when I saw the photo romance filled my head. :)<BR/><BR/>Anne- Thanks! I'm flattered by your compliments. You made my day. :)<BR/><BR/>Robert R.- Thanks :)<BR/><BR/>Marcail- Thanks :)<BR/><BR/>Writing Blind- Me too, Rebecca. Thanks :)<BR/><BR/>Linda- Thanks, I appreciate the compliment. :)<BR/><BR/>Flood- Thanks :)<BR/><BR/>Nicholas- Very perceptive! Thank you for the compliment. :)<BR/><BR/>klgilbert- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)<BR/><BR/>Robert B.- LOL Thanks :)<BR/><BR/>Jim- Thanks, I saw a romantic setting all the way in this photo. :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156802659379052272006-08-28T18:04:00.000-04:002006-08-28T18:04:00.000-04:00Full moon and romance. It doesn't get any better ...Full moon and romance. It doesn't get any better than this. Thanks for sharing, Jeff. It's beautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156788823279298812006-08-28T14:13:00.000-04:002006-08-28T14:13:00.000-04:00Robert Ball, you made me laugh. LOLJeff, this is s...Robert Ball, you made me laugh. LOL<BR/><BR/>Jeff, this is such a heartwarming story. The characters are endearing and real. Thanks for sharing this :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156787662661656302006-08-28T13:54:00.000-04:002006-08-28T13:54:00.000-04:00Aw Jeff you really need to write a book like this....Aw Jeff you really need to write a book like this. The world need more stuff like this. You just melted my heart :)Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156778355618540972006-08-28T11:19:00.000-04:002006-08-28T11:19:00.000-04:00So sweet and nicely written. Jeff! =DSo sweet and nicely written. Jeff! =DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156778173677223932006-08-28T11:16:00.000-04:002006-08-28T11:16:00.000-04:00Loved your story, Jeff. Fantastic, beautiful,and t...Loved your story, Jeff. Fantastic, beautiful,and touching. Marry me? JerJerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156716571056149042006-08-27T18:09:00.000-04:002006-08-27T18:09:00.000-04:00Thank you all for your kind comments. I appreciate...Thank you all for your kind comments. I appreciate each one. :)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156712675920692232006-08-27T17:04:00.000-04:002006-08-27T17:04:00.000-04:00Nice suprise ending, I thought they would drown to...Nice suprise ending, I thought they would drown together.Robert Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03197423779549182981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156707826989791602006-08-27T15:43:00.000-04:002006-08-27T15:43:00.000-04:00Oh, very nice. I agree - as much as I love the da...Oh, very nice. I agree - as much as I love the darker stories, this contest did need a more upbeat one. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156707119301845092006-08-27T15:31:00.000-04:002006-08-27T15:31:00.000-04:00Oh, I just love this. It is so romantic. What a ...Oh, I just love this. It is so romantic. What a guy!!! That's a real man for ya!<BR/><BR/>I agree with the above comment, the water represents a washing away of old feelings...and the bringing forth of a new life. (together) Excellent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156705914634504762006-08-27T15:11:00.000-04:002006-08-27T15:11:00.000-04:00What I like is this: Shadows on the lake at the be...What I like is this: Shadows on the lake at the beginning that foreshadow tragdy, and then the use of the same lake to 'cleanse' the situation at the end. Nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156705848638651252006-08-27T15:10:00.000-04:002006-08-27T15:10:00.000-04:00Very sweet, Jeff.Very sweet, Jeff.Floodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14341265651121116197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156698924377917432006-08-27T13:15:00.000-04:002006-08-27T13:15:00.000-04:00I like the way you got the whole story in so few w...I like the way you got the whole story in so few words. That is good writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156696733712067082006-08-27T12:38:00.000-04:002006-08-27T12:38:00.000-04:00Glad to see I'm not the only one to admit to getti...Glad to see I'm not the only one to admit to getting choked up, reading this.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the sweetness.bekbekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935766604154823539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156695884847589432006-08-27T12:24:00.000-04:002006-08-27T12:24:00.000-04:00*Sniff* I love happy endings.*Sniff* I love happy endings.writingblindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16102434762522512019noreply@blogger.com