tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115681789563522062..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #69Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157722402626838962006-09-08T09:33:00.000-04:002006-09-08T09:33:00.000-04:00I was mesmerized by this man walking out of life. ...I was mesmerized by this man walking out of life. I could see the momentum for such a thing. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156861183426411032006-08-29T10:19:00.000-04:002006-08-29T10:19:00.000-04:00How many times have I got to the Interstate onramp...How many times have I got to the Interstate onramp on my way to work, and considered for just a moment going South instead of North, and just driving driving driving? <BR/><BR/>This is beautiful and truthful. I also love the sense of promise, that this day of breaking away from the grind has liberated the character, and everything will be different from now on.<BR/><BR/>Maybe I should go South one morning...bekbekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17935766604154823539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156859657731334112006-08-29T09:54:00.000-04:002006-08-29T09:54:00.000-04:00Thank you all for such kind words... what a great ...Thank you all for such kind words... what a great way to start my day! Time to go get some coffee ;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156859188165302352006-08-29T09:46:00.000-04:002006-08-29T09:46:00.000-04:00Don't we all know what you mean. We all do what we...Don't we all know what you mean. We all do what we have to, and to what end? I guess you've answered that.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156858703239960012006-08-29T09:38:00.000-04:002006-08-29T09:38:00.000-04:00I bend over to clean the mess and I'm speckled wit...<I>I bend over to clean the mess and I'm speckled with street-sludge residue compliments of a passing delivery van.</I><BR/><BR/>That made me laugh out loud. <BR/><BR/>The honesty the voice carries definitely makes it familiar for a lot of readers. Very well done.Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156858515008622972006-08-29T09:35:00.000-04:002006-08-29T09:35:00.000-04:00I like this - so mundane, yet so extraordinary.I like this - so mundane, yet so extraordinary.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156836563485040082006-08-29T03:29:00.000-04:002006-08-29T03:29:00.000-04:00I liked the same line Anne did -- great switch in ...I liked the same line Anne did -- great switch in the meaning of the word "afford".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156825382885909682006-08-29T00:23:00.000-04:002006-08-29T00:23:00.000-04:00A breath of fresh air for the contest. Such famil...A breath of fresh air for the contest. Such familiar feelings. It's liberating to have them revealed in someone elses work. Awesome use of voice. Super job.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156822769469974542006-08-28T23:39:00.000-04:002006-08-28T23:39:00.000-04:00This piece is going to speak to a lot of people. I...This piece is going to speak to a lot of people. I also love the self-depricating humor. Great job!Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156820176387974892006-08-28T22:56:00.000-04:002006-08-28T22:56:00.000-04:00I like the simplicity of this. I agree with Anne,...I like the simplicity of this. I agree with Anne, a nice way of describing our "day to day".Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156819116146590172006-08-28T22:38:00.000-04:002006-08-28T22:38:00.000-04:00wow. very nice, david. this line spoke directly ...wow. very nice, david. <BR/><BR/>this line spoke directly to me:<BR/><BR/>I do the same thing every day, and I do it so I can afford to live for the next. <BR/><BR/>i loved the tone of the whole piece. <BR/><BR/>wonderful.anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.com