tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115681797660389992..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #71Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1158592269198465862006-09-18T11:11:00.000-04:002006-09-18T11:11:00.000-04:00Jason,I was hoping to hear this comment. I was try...Jason,I was hoping to hear this comment. I was trying to show Eric hardening his heart over Anneliese and I'n glad I was able to convey to this to the reader. Now, if only I could the piece I am working to gel. It's driving me crazy!<BR/>Take care,<BR/>AnnieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157722527384008422006-09-08T09:35:00.000-04:002006-09-08T09:35:00.000-04:00Oh, that was hard. So hard I'm actually irritated...Oh, that was hard. So hard I'm actually irritated. But that's a testiment to you. You accomplished what you set out to do. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156946654902538942006-08-30T10:04:00.000-04:002006-08-30T10:04:00.000-04:00So sad, so tender and what a gut-wrenching final l...So sad, so tender and what a gut-wrenching final line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156904647317575692006-08-29T22:24:00.000-04:002006-08-29T22:24:00.000-04:00True love's final kiss. Very tender, nicely done....True love's final kiss. Very tender, nicely done.Robert Ballhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03197423779549182981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156903645722121832006-08-29T22:07:00.000-04:002006-08-29T22:07:00.000-04:00Hi Everyone,Thanks for all the kind comments. I'm ...Hi Everyone,<BR/>Thanks for all the kind comments. I'm glad this story spoke to all of you in some small measure.<BR/>Anita.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156894400514655912006-08-29T19:33:00.000-04:002006-08-29T19:33:00.000-04:00so tender a story...loved itso tender a story...loved itAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156860415565401562006-08-29T10:06:00.000-04:002006-08-29T10:06:00.000-04:00Such a sad way to say goodbye...Such a sad way to say goodbye...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156859590585920572006-08-29T09:53:00.000-04:002006-08-29T09:53:00.000-04:00The details add such a charm to this piece. It's s...The details add such a charm to this piece. It's soft and delicate. Thanks for sharing. :)Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156858897233211032006-08-29T09:41:00.000-04:002006-08-29T09:41:00.000-04:00I loved your last line. Nodded to the nurse... O...I <I>loved</I> your last line. Nodded to the nurse... Ouch. Double ouch.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156836258603121122006-08-29T03:24:00.000-04:002006-08-29T03:24:00.000-04:00I like the transition between the cotton candy ima...I like the transition between the cotton candy image and the hard hospital bed railing.<BR/><BR/>A lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156823475116716742006-08-28T23:51:00.000-04:002006-08-28T23:51:00.000-04:00Positively gorgeous writing. Your depiction of th...Positively gorgeous writing. Your depiction of the various senses brought the scene alive. Tender, heartbreaking. Excellent.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156819456073202282006-08-28T22:44:00.000-04:002006-08-28T22:44:00.000-04:00aw, so sweet, tender, and sad.nice job, anita!aw, so sweet, tender, and sad.<BR/>nice job, anita!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.com