tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post115690227585185674..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #93Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157942008514040992006-09-10T22:33:00.000-04:002006-09-10T22:33:00.000-04:00The peace taking hold of him comes through well. ...The peace taking hold of him comes through well. I could feel the cool ground.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1157041273146559692006-08-31T12:21:00.000-04:002006-08-31T12:21:00.000-04:00This is such a wonderful story! The feeling of bei...This is such a wonderful story! The feeling of being liberated finally touched me to the core. And of course, the clouds being key line is a stealer. Very nice!Bhaswatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15397144389576029618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156985640475944372006-08-30T20:54:00.000-04:002006-08-30T20:54:00.000-04:00You're my all-time favorite author. MomYou're my all-time favorite author. MomAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156953150496854712006-08-30T11:52:00.000-04:002006-08-30T11:52:00.000-04:00Thanks to all for your comments.Thanks to all for your comments.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156945791538393462006-08-30T09:49:00.000-04:002006-08-30T09:49:00.000-04:00Really enjoyed it, Andy. Great job, wonderful imag...Really enjoyed it, Andy. Great job, wonderful imagery. JerJerilyn Dufresne, authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02720391625949782016noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156942095856694592006-08-30T08:48:00.000-04:002006-08-30T08:48:00.000-04:00An effective piece. Liked it.An effective piece. Liked it.Judehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121286194338647357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156941470438288352006-08-30T08:37:00.000-04:002006-08-30T08:37:00.000-04:00Andy, you're practically in my back yard! (I live ...Andy, you're practically in my back yard! (I live just 30 minutes north of Indy.)<BR/><BR/>I liked the simplicity of this death and the satisfaction of dying a free man. Really liked the imagery of that last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156925753125276422006-08-30T04:15:00.000-04:002006-08-30T04:15:00.000-04:00I agree with Joni. In its context, "Every cloud lo...I agree with Joni. <BR/><BR/>In its context, "Every cloud looked like a key" is one of the best lines of the contest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156904344326608122006-08-29T22:19:00.000-04:002006-08-29T22:19:00.000-04:00awww, andy. very nice. i loved that death was hi...awww, andy. very nice. i loved that death was his escape from a life he couldn't tolerate or endure.anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1156903040592086712006-08-29T21:57:00.000-04:002006-08-29T21:57:00.000-04:00"Every cloud looked like a key" - love that line ..."Every cloud looked like a key" - love that line - linked the whole piece. <BR/><BR/>I love the liberation and the peace in the face of fatal injury and a long prison sentence. Excellent.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.com