tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post116847931004008288..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #45Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168918539217771392007-01-15T22:35:00.000-05:002007-01-15T22:35:00.000-05:00Expertly done. Great sense of balance and pacing....Expertly done. Great sense of balance and pacing. You give the reader little rests right where they're needed.<BR/><BR/>Highest marks overall!<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on 3rd Place!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168621146844189652007-01-12T11:59:00.000-05:002007-01-12T11:59:00.000-05:00Really enjoyed this one John, Nice pacing, a bit o...Really enjoyed this one John, <BR/><BR/>Nice pacing, a bit of comedy mixed in, and the 'real fiction' aspect as well.<BR/><BR/>Good work<BR/><BR/>BDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168617503350404942007-01-12T10:58:00.000-05:002007-01-12T10:58:00.000-05:00Thanks for the kind words! And Waveman... good on...Thanks for the kind words! <BR/>And Waveman... good on ya' for noticing my use of a real life incident. I thought it would be a good fit for the moral/legal shades of grey in my little story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168568450306575552007-01-11T21:20:00.000-05:002007-01-11T21:20:00.000-05:00Oh, nice! You totally got me with this. Twists roc...Oh, nice! You totally got me with this. Twists rock! And you even pulled it off in 250 words. :-)s.w. vaughnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09102544611773720262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168547053583173672007-01-11T15:24:00.000-05:002007-01-11T15:24:00.000-05:00god, retrograde: 20 bucks 20 years ago or moregod, retrograde: 20 bucks 20 years ago or moreDafathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04786106615120535425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168543580651219092007-01-11T14:26:00.000-05:002007-01-11T14:26:00.000-05:00Nice voice here, somehow very believable and reali...Nice voice here, somehow very believable and realistic.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168536420374874802007-01-11T12:27:00.000-05:002007-01-11T12:27:00.000-05:00Pretty tough life eh? All the best with the next 1...Pretty tough life eh? All the best with the next 10 months.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168535430798264682007-01-11T12:10:00.000-05:002007-01-11T12:10:00.000-05:00The true story of the bank robbery recently in the...The true story of the bank robbery recently in the news worked in there was brilliant. Fiction inspired by real life is some of the best.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168522724353521592007-01-11T08:38:00.000-05:002007-01-11T08:38:00.000-05:00Good!Good!Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168517622952137132007-01-11T07:13:00.000-05:002007-01-11T07:13:00.000-05:00Ooh, I love that last line and the vein of humour ...Ooh, I love that last line and the vein of humour throughout!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168510351552368512007-01-11T05:12:00.000-05:002007-01-11T05:12:00.000-05:00Good story, well written and nicely crafted.Good story, well written and nicely crafted.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168491108431545992007-01-10T23:51:00.000-05:002007-01-10T23:51:00.000-05:00Yeah, yeah, very well crafted. Nice.Yeah, yeah, very well crafted. Nice.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168486907378561172007-01-10T22:41:00.000-05:002007-01-10T22:41:00.000-05:00Nice pacing. Good story!Nice pacing. Good story!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168486283892936672007-01-10T22:31:00.000-05:002007-01-10T22:31:00.000-05:00Good voice, and a nice twist. Good job!Good voice, and a nice twist. Good job!Fran Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08177027484914337117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168485483910853452007-01-10T22:18:00.000-05:002007-01-10T22:18:00.000-05:00That's funny :-)That's funny :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com