tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post116848488365091611..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #49Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168952067645234042007-01-16T07:54:00.000-05:002007-01-16T07:54:00.000-05:00Jason, I really appreciate it, and I truly appreci...Jason, I really appreciate it, and I truly appreciate the inspiration you provide with your contests and your support of everybody's writing. <BR/><BR/>It's odd that I can also see so many ways to tighten this in editing. I'm glad I decided to leave it alone for a while, though. It's good to let the stew simmer. :)<BR/><BR/>BeckyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168919172506930602007-01-15T22:46:00.000-05:002007-01-15T22:46:00.000-05:00There is a realness and complexity and humanity to...There is a realness and complexity and humanity to this piece. It's really quite amazing how much is expressed in 250 words. This is like a clinic how to pour in those special elements that make a story unlike an other written before or since.<BR/><BR/>Highest marks overall.<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on 2nd Place!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168624623100902862007-01-12T12:57:00.000-05:002007-01-12T12:57:00.000-05:00Thanks, everybody.Thanks, everybody.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168614114789135672007-01-12T10:01:00.000-05:002007-01-12T10:01:00.000-05:00A very evocative and poignant story.A very evocative and poignant story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168568031745792912007-01-11T21:13:00.000-05:002007-01-11T21:13:00.000-05:00A moving story, in all possible meanings of the wo...A moving story, in all possible meanings of the word. :-)s.w. vaughnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09102544611773720262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168552863722128092007-01-11T17:01:00.000-05:002007-01-11T17:01:00.000-05:00I like this. I really like this....I like this. I really like this....diana christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00717974509387079626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168546778685562112007-01-11T15:19:00.000-05:002007-01-11T15:19:00.000-05:00i very much liked the 1st paragraphi very much liked the 1st paragraphDafathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04786106615120535425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168534959681862862007-01-11T12:02:00.000-05:002007-01-11T12:02:00.000-05:00Wohoo, good story from a fellow former Torontonian...Wohoo, good story from a fellow former Torontonian (say that 10 times fast).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168516971351465652007-01-11T07:02:00.000-05:002007-01-11T07:02:00.000-05:00A poignant story about leaving, making the wall se...A poignant story about leaving, making the wall seem quite positive.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168496898254428212007-01-11T01:28:00.000-05:002007-01-11T01:28:00.000-05:00They're not rushin!" Loved that line! Very nice en...They're not rushin!" Loved that line! Very nice entry Rebecca.<BR/><BR/>BDAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168494395593047042007-01-11T00:46:00.000-05:002007-01-11T00:46:00.000-05:00loved it, rebecca.loved it, rebecca.anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.com