tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post116848492566753833..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #50Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168919265797385562007-01-15T22:47:00.000-05:002007-01-15T22:47:00.000-05:00Such an effective way of showing his inability to ...Such an effective way of showing his inability to concentrate. His wandering thoughts were well done.<BR/><BR/>High marks for entertainment and voice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168635057245538892007-01-12T15:50:00.000-05:002007-01-12T15:50:00.000-05:00Thanks everyone!My wife and I had a great time wor...Thanks everyone!<BR/><BR/>My wife and I had a great time working on this piece. <BR/><BR/>We shaved it down from 400 words and are really happy with it. <BR/><BR/>It was tough to kill some of the darlings, but found that, in the end, the piece was better off.emeraldcitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11495241111424476230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168612844792307142007-01-12T09:40:00.000-05:002007-01-12T09:40:00.000-05:00Good and gripping piece of writing which really dr...Good and gripping piece of writing which really draws the reader in. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168598273225856352007-01-12T05:37:00.000-05:002007-01-12T05:37:00.000-05:00Well played. I liked the last line on this one.Well played. I liked the last line on this one.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168567884984032492007-01-11T21:11:00.000-05:002007-01-11T21:11:00.000-05:00Oh. As a parent, this one broke my heart... well d...Oh. As a parent, this one broke my heart... well done!s.w. vaughnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09102544611773720262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168537610441441722007-01-11T12:46:00.000-05:002007-01-11T12:46:00.000-05:00"He wasn't that bad anymore".Enough said."He wasn't that bad anymore".<BR/>Enough said.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168530312715564942007-01-11T10:45:00.000-05:002007-01-11T10:45:00.000-05:00Good story!Good story!Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168530042148655342007-01-11T10:40:00.000-05:002007-01-11T10:40:00.000-05:00oooohh... cold shivers! nice!oooohh... cold shivers! nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168516023056519922007-01-11T06:47:00.000-05:002007-01-11T06:47:00.000-05:00This gives the impression of being a really bad to...This gives the impression of being a really bad town to live in. Good idea.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1168494443401001672007-01-11T00:47:00.000-05:002007-01-11T00:47:00.000-05:00very nice!very nice!anne frasierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044828332429421657noreply@blogger.com