tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post1273310212871979415..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #211Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35435712383100684042010-02-09T23:26:06.323-05:002010-02-09T23:26:06.323-05:00Very Nice :-)Very Nice :-)pravanjanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04633388081664182460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62428530514267308282010-01-19T14:13:22.848-05:002010-01-19T14:13:22.848-05:00Very cool!Very cool!Kartikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01067636999700672077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6189964707075924532010-01-19T14:12:41.519-05:002010-01-19T14:12:41.519-05:00Loved the rat under the car and the cat who was ne...Loved the rat under the car and the cat who was negatively entrained by the hot fire! This was original and refreshing and whimsical.catvibehttp://www.catvibe.net/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88714976637024357302010-01-19T08:39:08.510-05:002010-01-19T08:39:08.510-05:00This is possibly the coolest story I've read s...This is possibly the coolest story I've read so far in this contest :)Terrihttp://misterri.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60791487860984038812010-01-18T18:35:58.863-05:002010-01-18T18:35:58.863-05:00I find it sad that he didn't get to see the ki...I find it sad that he didn't get to see the kite flip back, but maybe knowing it would happen was enough for him. Love that he's a rat that's also a bird watcher.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9887130816957418122010-01-18T13:57:49.887-05:002010-01-18T13:57:49.887-05:00Took me a moment to get it, but well done!Took me a moment to get it, but well done!Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28386749143073515882010-01-17T17:21:47.379-05:002010-01-17T17:21:47.379-05:00I enjoyed that.I enjoyed that.Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344917148662934359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64696992149040579982010-01-17T16:10:14.872-05:002010-01-17T16:10:14.872-05:00Lovely gentle humour. Pete is a rat with poet'...Lovely gentle humour. Pete is a rat with poet's soul.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23445688620724837712010-01-16T08:24:50.460-05:002010-01-16T08:24:50.460-05:00Now why do I have visions of "The Kite Runner...Now why do I have visions of "The Kite Runner" going through my noggin'? Interesting way to construct a story. Nicely told.James R. Tomlinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49815637439703081882010-01-16T07:56:00.868-05:002010-01-16T07:56:00.868-05:00Hmmnn... i liked this.
it was a new perspective ...Hmmnn... i liked this. <br /><br />it was a new perspective and a unique take on the prompt.Preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00279859240371070699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16637668069361541242010-01-15T23:26:23.919-05:002010-01-15T23:26:23.919-05:00Caveat
Something I Would Keep
The pace is playful,...<br><br><a href="http://www.insearchofgiants.com/2010/01/commenting-on-silhouette.html" rel="nofollow">Caveat</a><br><br /><b>Something I Would Keep</b><br><br />The pace is playful, Aesop-ian.<br /><br /><b>Something I Might Tweak</b><br><br />I would either use dialogue throughout, or not use dialogue in the beginning. To only have a little felt a little unbalanced, to me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6369828012135409482010-01-15T06:02:10.298-05:002010-01-15T06:02:10.298-05:00I like it it, a lot.
"whispered loudly"...I like it it, <i>a lot</i>.<br /><br />"whispered loudly" was the only thing that didn't sit well with me and made me stop while reading.<br /><br />I loved the piece to core with everything else. We have been reading tons of stories about freedom. To me, this rat seems to be the one to truly be a free spirit.<br /><br />Great story!Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62079546128570266272010-01-14T19:16:43.054-05:002010-01-14T19:16:43.054-05:00good stuff... but how does one castrate a tail?good stuff... but how does one castrate a tail?laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90316250908387909962010-01-14T15:25:45.372-05:002010-01-14T15:25:45.372-05:00nice one dude..nice one dude..anuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132426273901751481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61409700454182081882010-01-14T15:23:36.344-05:002010-01-14T15:23:36.344-05:00Ha! Nicely turned at the end.Ha! Nicely turned at the end.Deb Smythenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31001040180472196762010-01-14T02:22:30.305-05:002010-01-14T02:22:30.305-05:00Funny! Sensed a hint of melancholic pride in Pete&...Funny! Sensed a hint of melancholic pride in Pete's little beady eye!Muktanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81883644151290477882010-01-13T23:49:11.838-05:002010-01-13T23:49:11.838-05:00Thank you all :)Thank you all :)BrownPhantomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17727840657080964378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20674668216841296372010-01-13T22:00:04.935-05:002010-01-13T22:00:04.935-05:00Nicely surreal.Nicely surreal.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31676549742769530842010-01-13T21:52:10.334-05:002010-01-13T21:52:10.334-05:00Cute!Cute!Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59764972366945952092010-01-13T21:49:34.047-05:002010-01-13T21:49:34.047-05:00I hope that when it is my time, my life will have ...I hope that when it is my time, my life will have been one worthy of such an epitaph.Kurt Hendrickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16183333362118745153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38935485998294265732010-01-13T19:43:51.874-05:002010-01-13T19:43:51.874-05:00Clever, clever, clever! I love this one! Witty, a ...Clever, clever, clever! I love this one! Witty, a bit poignant at the end. An epicurean life well lived.<br /><br />Kudos!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.com