tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post1473897308973111946..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #119Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38992124023406265592009-07-30T12:27:25.666-04:002009-07-30T12:27:25.666-04:00Thanks, Jason. The Forties Club?Thanks, Jason. The Forties Club?Rabid Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307255127156087170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40944655012954833872009-07-27T08:33:20.073-04:002009-07-27T08:33:20.073-04:00She's been too good a student, perhaps. The t...She's been too good a student, perhaps. The teacher falls. Well told.<br /><br />Welcome to The Forties Club!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32301213565277414402009-07-23T12:12:27.648-04:002009-07-23T12:12:27.648-04:00You reap what you sow. This was brilliant.You reap what you sow. This was brilliant.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66787656552355648162009-07-20T13:19:02.880-04:002009-07-20T13:19:02.880-04:00I think this piece was pretty perfect.I think this piece was pretty perfect.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73482851823784160072009-07-20T13:09:30.602-04:002009-07-20T13:09:30.602-04:00Thanks for all of the feedback, folks. I really ap...Thanks for all of the feedback, folks. I really appreciate it.Rabid Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307255127156087170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45375502391334818382009-07-17T13:53:30.526-04:002009-07-17T13:53:30.526-04:00Your world-building, especially in just 250 words,...Your world-building, especially in just 250 words, is peerless. As a fantasy uber-geek, I drool at the prospect of your future work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82530210670380435942009-07-16T20:45:04.492-04:002009-07-16T20:45:04.492-04:00Cat and Aniket, he is an intellectual tyrant. Ego...Cat and Aniket, he is an intellectual tyrant. Egotistical and powerful, he holds his mastery over her head. His assumption is that she must love him because he loves her.<br /><br />I love this from start to finish. The word choice, the smooth dialog and action, the innovative magic and the names you've given the spells. Really quite a satisfactory read.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85631368580538643942009-07-16T14:54:13.697-04:002009-07-16T14:54:13.697-04:00I believe he misread some signals. :)I believe he misread some signals. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-41861493488405767152009-07-16T12:30:32.805-04:002009-07-16T12:30:32.805-04:00I like the imagination in this story. It would ma...I like the imagination in this story. It would make a great book but enough was written here to make it a complete story on it's own. Great use of words too.<br />Yep, all in all, well done :-)Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61801572377929856682009-07-16T05:37:56.737-04:002009-07-16T05:37:56.737-04:00I was wondering on Cat's lines too,
I want a ...I was wondering on Cat's lines too,<br /><br />I want a back story now. Coz they both seemed pretty cold blooded killers to me. Its like they were meant for each other. :D<br /><br />At least he appreciated her cleverness till the end. A little therepy probably would have made him more understanding.<br /><br />Girls these days, they'll kill but never take that extra step. :D<br /><br />Okay, am just fooling around here now. I quite liked the piece. The language as mentioned by others was quite strong too. :)Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89189534475947838732009-07-15T08:49:48.590-04:002009-07-15T08:49:48.590-04:00Well I guess he had it coming. Although it make m...Well I guess he had it coming. Although it make me wonder how he was a tyrant, aside from the parent killing thing. Both of them are kind of passionate in their bloodletting ways!Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65237744387334395102009-07-14T22:02:26.578-04:002009-07-14T22:02:26.578-04:00I wonder whether men or women have done most of th...I wonder whether men or women have done most of the killing in this competition?<br /><br />The wife drinks a lot of wine.<br /><br />This is now a worry....;-)<br /><br />I like this very much.<br /><br /><br />Four DinnersThe Preachermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10224135811862587701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15634987824884400312009-07-14T19:36:46.564-04:002009-07-14T19:36:46.564-04:00A lot of stories about death and or sadness to go ...A lot of stories about death and or sadness to go with this glass of wine.<br />But I am entertainedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60588682177097851512009-07-14T19:36:00.462-04:002009-07-14T19:36:00.462-04:00cauterized her parents from her life ... nice line...cauterized her parents from her life ... nice line. I think I'd've went with a different POV though.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39606282370065238402009-07-14T19:10:58.338-04:002009-07-14T19:10:58.338-04:00This is a very unique piece of writing, and it mak...This is a very unique piece of writing, and it makes me want to read more.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13860024042221101257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-47815062654449318252009-07-14T19:10:37.117-04:002009-07-14T19:10:37.117-04:00damn, but that's well done! :)damn, but that's well done! :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88692273681824557202009-07-14T19:02:55.991-04:002009-07-14T19:02:55.991-04:00This is fascinating. I totally want to know the ba...This is fascinating. I totally want to know the backstory.<br /><br />AND I love how you worked the photo into the opening. <br /><br />Nice use of words, too, like "cauterized."Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.com