tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post1682446785628929742..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #104Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68364330621345747292009-01-20T22:40:00.000-05:002009-01-20T22:40:00.000-05:00Great job with pacing, entertainment value, storyt...Great job with pacing, entertainment value, storytelling, and voice!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for being a wonderful part of the contest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64425702084489677212009-01-19T23:23:00.000-05:002009-01-19T23:23:00.000-05:00Jimmie, this is not a story that I should be readi...Jimmie, this is not a story that I should be reading just before bedtime! There are many lessons here including you get what you pay for and watch out for fat men in red suits! I loved how you animated the bulldozer. Your last line was perfect. Great job!Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17075596786647102438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40417883859997037492009-01-19T17:06:00.000-05:002009-01-19T17:06:00.000-05:00wow...this was so interesting.sounds like she put ...wow...this was so interesting.<BR/>sounds like she put her dollar away just in time. did she not get on? great story. nicely written.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44821046872561332812009-01-19T13:33:00.000-05:002009-01-19T13:33:00.000-05:00A quick note to all of you who have taken the time...A quick note to all of you who have taken the time to read through and provide written comments here - thanks for your input - good or bad it's always appreciated. This has been a much more interesting, thought provoking exercise than I ever expected it to be. One photograph - 125 wildly varying interpretations - kinda cool when you think about it.<BR/><BR/>Jim ValentiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69463926629132320812009-01-19T11:02:00.000-05:002009-01-19T11:02:00.000-05:00Thanks! Jimmie. Good pen.Thanks! Jimmie. Good pen.Victor Bravo Monchego, Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251479110131293284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83165640846544456892009-01-18T21:38:00.000-05:002009-01-18T21:38:00.000-05:00Dark! And Delightfully horrible, Jimmie (I mean wh...Dark! And Delightfully horrible, Jimmie (I mean what transpired in your story and not your writing). I loved this story!<BR/><BR/>janabluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35327418815856780312009-01-18T12:56:00.000-05:002009-01-18T12:56:00.000-05:00Loved this one, jimmie:)You've got some imaginatio...Loved this one, jimmie<BR/>:)<BR/>You've got some imagination! <BR/>Resounding thud. <BR/>Loved that!<BR/>:DRiverSoulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15417054068931773922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12798031832439843712009-01-17T19:40:00.000-05:002009-01-17T19:40:00.000-05:00Wow, this one was mind-bending. What a striking ta...Wow, this one was mind-bending. What a striking take on spectacle and man's mindless curiosity and gullibility. Ask questions later, I guess. <BR/><BR/>Stunning job, Jimmie. The image of those people falling and the bulldozer pushing them aside will stick with me for awhile. Just superb.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65083121952019325312009-01-17T13:38:00.000-05:002009-01-17T13:38:00.000-05:00Wonderfully bizarre!Wonderfully bizarre!Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14406998554095598962009-01-16T20:36:00.000-05:002009-01-16T20:36:00.000-05:00Sounds like a Twilight Zone episode. Very creativ...Sounds like a Twilight Zone episode. Very creative despite the gore!Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42776859538058609212009-01-16T16:24:00.000-05:002009-01-16T16:24:00.000-05:00comical unique yet so sad... loved the bulldozer s...comical unique yet so sad... loved the bulldozer standing idle... dang, a dollar for a cheap pony ride...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18229283508934488412009-01-16T12:44:00.000-05:002009-01-16T12:44:00.000-05:00wait wait wait, was the fat man santa claus or Jer...wait wait wait, was the fat man santa claus or Jerry Garcia? I'm so confused.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87066582588106480302009-01-16T12:24:00.000-05:002009-01-16T12:24:00.000-05:00Cool entry. I like this story a lot.Nice Zeppelin...Cool entry. I like this story a lot.<BR/><BR/>Nice Zeppelin reference in the title.<BR/><BR/>Paul (entry #26)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8157744418754100282009-01-16T11:02:00.000-05:002009-01-16T11:02:00.000-05:00Thank goodness the narrator didn't go first! Exce...Thank goodness the narrator didn't go first! Excellent take on the theme.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81779177011696379132009-01-16T08:23:00.000-05:002009-01-16T08:23:00.000-05:00Love the unexpectedness of this.Love the unexpectedness of this.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14380715075305754452009-01-15T23:26:00.000-05:002009-01-15T23:26:00.000-05:00very tight clever piece.very tight clever piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65738527531558334612009-01-15T14:37:00.000-05:002009-01-15T14:37:00.000-05:00Yeah, put that dollar away. The lemmings angle is ...Yeah, put that dollar away. The lemmings angle is very good. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45563754100205278462009-01-15T07:19:00.000-05:002009-01-15T07:19:00.000-05:00It reminds me of the way Lemmings go on the comput...It reminds me of the way Lemmings go on the computer games - each one following the one in front to their death.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68916454386856643682009-01-15T03:09:00.000-05:002009-01-15T03:09:00.000-05:00Thats some imagination here. Really enjoyed readin...Thats some imagination here. Really enjoyed reading :)Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787400183444796423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53054656411767230192009-01-14T19:56:00.000-05:002009-01-14T19:56:00.000-05:00silly boy, spend a buck! :O lolsilly boy, spend a buck! :O lollaughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67515046403599238992009-01-14T19:04:00.000-05:002009-01-14T19:04:00.000-05:00I really enjoyed your sense of humour in this piec...I really enjoyed your sense of humour in this piece. The splats on the ground proved it really was a stairway to heaven. Brilliant!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61132584529726461712009-01-14T18:48:00.000-05:002009-01-14T18:48:00.000-05:00Excellent. Vivid imagination.Excellent. Vivid imagination.wrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-213253834282532032009-01-14T17:59:00.000-05:002009-01-14T17:59:00.000-05:00There's a sucker born every minute. That is, exce...There's a sucker born every minute. That is, except for your narrator.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49855827158821129042009-01-14T16:16:00.000-05:002009-01-14T16:16:00.000-05:00Awesome! Loved this one!Awesome! Loved this one!Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28917525836966174262009-01-14T16:02:00.000-05:002009-01-14T16:02:00.000-05:00That was eerie!Great imagination :)That was eerie!Great imagination :)Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.com