tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post1749687368289159616..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #25Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88866810041623330322009-01-20T21:36:00.000-05:002009-01-20T21:36:00.000-05:00Great job on pacing and technical skill!Thanks for...Great job on pacing and technical skill!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for being a wonderful part of the contest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-272034997954478582009-01-19T15:07:00.000-05:002009-01-19T15:07:00.000-05:00ohhh....lusty. What a ride.nice writingohhh....lusty. What a ride.<BR/>nice writingEsther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8772645968523917052009-01-18T22:57:00.000-05:002009-01-18T22:57:00.000-05:00yes, so many emotions evoked in one little piece o...yes, so many emotions evoked in one little piece of writing. Longing, lust, regret, and - most of all - humor! Loved this one!<BR/><BR/>janabluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57144238371590066912009-01-18T17:16:00.000-05:002009-01-18T17:16:00.000-05:00how deceptively divine... sometimes uncontrollable...how deceptively divine... sometimes uncontrollable acts are easily engaged with little consequence... renee #45Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11747267043947692172009-01-18T10:33:00.000-05:002009-01-18T10:33:00.000-05:00I guess...one should take a chance sometimes in li...I guess...one should take a chance sometimes in life and not fall back on "its life"<BR/><BR/>well written...ceedyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17767787593275846653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1295176267546256682009-01-17T13:16:00.000-05:002009-01-17T13:16:00.000-05:00Loved the lustful passion. Good read, nice pacing...Loved the lustful passion. Good read, nice pacing.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85787910595164425362009-01-15T05:39:00.000-05:002009-01-15T05:39:00.000-05:00Really strong voice and that's why I love it.Really strong voice and that's why I love it.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60038472031838390562009-01-10T16:26:00.000-05:002009-01-10T16:26:00.000-05:00It is hard to ignore a fine butt that's right ther...It <I>is</I> hard to ignore a fine butt that's right there in front of you. I love the internal dialogue a mixture of fantasy, prayer and daring herself to be brazen.<BR/><BR/>Very enjoyable read Stephen.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89270579512154003012009-01-10T00:37:00.000-05:002009-01-10T00:37:00.000-05:00I'm thinking about that Dear God song ... what if ...I'm thinking about that Dear God song ... what if God were one of us ... but then again, we wouldn't be as emotionally honest as your main character, would we?JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89976866096217268002009-01-09T13:30:00.000-05:002009-01-09T13:30:00.000-05:00Love the perspective :)Love the perspective :)Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53493626126864492332009-01-09T10:32:00.000-05:002009-01-09T10:32:00.000-05:00I love the way you've evoked so many emotions with...I love the way you've evoked so many emotions with this piece. :)Ruinwen Dagoriellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17838849121945131543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69179627277404297452009-01-09T03:30:00.000-05:002009-01-09T03:30:00.000-05:00loved the humor here. really well done!loved the humor here. really well done!Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787400183444796423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28284747663673114912009-01-09T00:00:00.000-05:002009-01-09T00:00:00.000-05:00lol@stephen well done :)lol@stephen well done :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60319545333815928672009-01-08T22:45:00.000-05:002009-01-08T22:45:00.000-05:00that was a great read! love it. sply the way u bro...that was a great read! love it. sply the way u brought the charcter to life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35239068389528980332009-01-08T21:33:00.000-05:002009-01-08T21:33:00.000-05:00Oh, nice. :) You managed humor, heat, and even des...Oh, nice. :) You managed humor, heat, and even despair, all in one ride. Really enjoyed the voice here, too. Pretty ballsy to be <I>quite</I> so honest with God. ;) <BR/><BR/>Great take, Stephen! Really strong writing. The character leaped to life.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53593912795124829492009-01-08T21:31:00.000-05:002009-01-08T21:31:00.000-05:00This one sang to me. Loved the voice and the humor...This one sang to me. Loved the voice and the humor here. Great job!Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32954830359897551742009-01-08T20:57:00.000-05:002009-01-08T20:57:00.000-05:00I enjoyed this - good read. Literary quality.I enjoyed this - good read. Literary quality.K.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19044649124712566392009-01-08T17:58:00.000-05:002009-01-08T17:58:00.000-05:00That was naughty.Nice depiction of a college crush...That was naughty.Nice depiction of a college crush longing.Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.com