tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post1997283345321553749..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #128Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84827389205134198912009-07-27T15:02:00.635-04:002009-07-27T15:02:00.635-04:00Thanks, Jason.Thanks, Jason.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73498968005702031612009-07-27T09:46:28.953-04:002009-07-27T09:46:28.953-04:00That ending line had a lot of impact. Great metap...That ending line had a lot of impact. Great metaphor here. Very inventive and clever.<br /><br />Welcome to The Forties Club!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-92187096585594530592009-07-23T14:11:57.117-04:002009-07-23T14:11:57.117-04:00Thank you.Thank you.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-47203594541644298992009-07-23T12:06:57.483-04:002009-07-23T12:06:57.483-04:00I guess he never promised her a rose garden.
this ...I guess he never promised her a rose garden.<br />this was so beautiful and sad - I loved how you related the wine to the seasons.....<br />in the end, the pretty is replaced by alcoholism....<br />beautifully written. good work.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86790033936351870652009-07-20T13:55:51.235-04:002009-07-20T13:55:51.235-04:00Beautiful, poetic, moving. Wonderful.Beautiful, poetic, moving. Wonderful.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42598201881975247202009-07-19T03:53:29.822-04:002009-07-19T03:53:29.822-04:00Simple, elegant and melancholic.
I liked it.Simple, elegant and melancholic.<br /><br />I liked it.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45208000694801912872009-07-17T17:48:23.083-04:002009-07-17T17:48:23.083-04:00The first three comments say all that needs to be ...The first three comments say all that needs to be said.<br /><br /><i>You're all very kind and have me blushing the same colour as that wine.</i><br /><br />Oh, aren't you cute! :-)PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32056369830005612232009-07-17T14:03:47.990-04:002009-07-17T14:03:47.990-04:00Beautiful. Sad but beautiful.Beautiful. Sad but beautiful.Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57191760213345372522009-07-17T13:25:04.200-04:002009-07-17T13:25:04.200-04:00You're all very kind and have me blushing the ...You're all very kind and have me blushing the same colour as that wine.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80129211517289699812009-07-17T12:48:51.758-04:002009-07-17T12:48:51.758-04:00There's a lot of poetry in this competition th...There's a lot of poetry in this competition that people have said is prose poetry, but yours is poetry prose - so beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63003908693978472862009-07-17T11:45:00.480-04:002009-07-17T11:45:00.480-04:00A sad accounting of time lost.A sad accounting of time lost.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70338714931208161772009-07-17T00:04:09.451-04:002009-07-17T00:04:09.451-04:00wine to mark the seasons of life and love. excelle...wine to mark the seasons of life and love. excellent idea.quin brownehttp://www.quinbrowne-words.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56914439593076523312009-07-16T13:16:03.769-04:002009-07-16T13:16:03.769-04:00Nicely done. Such a melancholy vibe. Sigh.Nicely done. Such a melancholy vibe. Sigh.Deb Snoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-92031412679469537752009-07-16T07:33:18.582-04:002009-07-16T07:33:18.582-04:00Thanks very much.Thanks very much.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6507269317202727982009-07-16T04:58:20.567-04:002009-07-16T04:58:20.567-04:00A lyrical ballad! I like it very much. Thanks for ...A lyrical ballad! I like it very much. Thanks for the pleasure.Ranee Kaur Banerjeehttp://www.raneespoems.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56395956505183000302009-07-15T20:44:46.601-04:002009-07-15T20:44:46.601-04:00Seasonal linkages -- well related.
For me, it'...Seasonal linkages -- well related.<br />For me, it's de months of may -- poetics and First of May recalled -- and september, that's when we Try to remember, the kind of September...Well done again, Che3ers, YLchong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55430522344540674942009-07-15T19:34:42.721-04:002009-07-15T19:34:42.721-04:00Great story. It shows us how truth about things( h...Great story. It shows us how truth about things( here the wine) is relative!Monahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615034229525061880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16655062083062548292009-07-15T14:13:51.074-04:002009-07-15T14:13:51.074-04:00Thanks for all the lovely comments.
It is sad. I ...Thanks for all the lovely comments.<br /><br />It is sad. I didn't intend it to be - maybe all that wine made me maudlin?Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12263765378083045973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65971835389894342802009-07-15T13:01:24.577-04:002009-07-15T13:01:24.577-04:00This is beautiful, it tugs at the heartstrings and...This is beautiful, it tugs at the heartstrings and your seasonal descriptions are great.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62365375737749573032009-07-15T10:31:15.570-04:002009-07-15T10:31:15.570-04:00Good piece of writing that will be in the shortlis...Good piece of writing that will be in the shortlist for sure! Well done!Peterhttp://www.redbubble.com/people/intimatestrangersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10903284783495637222009-07-15T09:14:10.630-04:002009-07-15T09:14:10.630-04:00superb!superb!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88953129535489135092009-07-15T08:42:19.000-04:002009-07-15T08:42:19.000-04:00I know how it feels, a season seems beautiful only...I know how it feels, a season seems beautiful only by your lovers side...<br />My kinda writeup :)aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464870785851270367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44489721452112960722009-07-15T07:57:15.237-04:002009-07-15T07:57:15.237-04:00I loved this one. Simple yet elegant and romantic...I loved this one. Simple yet elegant and romantic, melancholic. <br /><br />WV=diontyri even the computer is getting drunk on all this wine. :-)Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89177778727397996432009-07-14T23:17:21.057-04:002009-07-14T23:17:21.057-04:00Pretty effect and the tying the wine to a lover an...Pretty effect and the tying the wine to a lover and then to the seasons is a nice touch.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1169993372822320062009-07-14T23:15:05.519-04:002009-07-14T23:15:05.519-04:00This was really beautiful. I love the pairing of ...This was really beautiful. I love the pairing of wines and seasons, and admire your judicious use of detail. Nicely done!Kimberly B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06915078905615036882noreply@blogger.com