tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2013320360987910241..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #92Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25831951676930527732011-07-31T15:04:09.038-04:002011-07-31T15:04:09.038-04:00A noir-esque piece. I like the juxtraposition of ...A noir-esque piece. I like the juxtraposition of the characters. I especially liked the pacing and sentence construction.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91995526297908505272011-07-25T00:15:52.095-04:002011-07-25T00:15:52.095-04:00bluesugarpoet: Thanks!
Rachel: Yes, unlike most w...<b>bluesugarpoet:</b> Thanks!<br /><br /><b>Rachel:</b> Yes, unlike most writers, I struggle with description - more comfortable with dialogue. Thanks for peeping. Appreciate it.<br /><br /><b>Old Kitty:</b> haha..glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much!<br /><br /><b>Mikki:</b> kind of you - thanks!<br /><br /><b>Richard:</b> Thank you for the encouraging words.phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3779010218157849852011-07-23T19:03:50.664-04:002011-07-23T19:03:50.664-04:00Oh, I had fun reading this. The dialogue was sharp...Oh, I had fun reading this. The dialogue was sharp and the scene was amusing.Richard Levangiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16596356126446766607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57916823469857334082011-07-23T11:59:07.597-04:002011-07-23T11:59:07.597-04:00Your dialogue really brought this to life. I love...Your dialogue really brought this to life. I love the twist.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing!Michele Zugnonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12394802719932859470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64394898320577850372011-07-22T18:46:25.461-04:002011-07-22T18:46:25.461-04:00You really had me going in the first half thinking...You really had me going in the first half thinking this was a murder story...!!!! Yay!! I loved how drawn I was only to be taken aback by the conclusion!! Wonderful, thank you. Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68412726557029522322011-07-22T18:41:15.134-04:002011-07-22T18:41:15.134-04:00Fun to read and nearly all of it dialogue. That...Fun to read and nearly all of it dialogue. That's something I struggle with and yours feels fluid and effortless.<br /><br />Liked the little sarcasm at the end.Rachelhttp://artsdaughter.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45654534671111659142011-07-22T16:02:41.218-04:002011-07-22T16:02:41.218-04:00Crime scene or art? You had me guessing! Nice twis...Crime scene or art? You had me guessing! Nice twist! :) ~Jana Abluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62504458222662719992011-07-22T03:34:12.665-04:002011-07-22T03:34:12.665-04:00Brigid: Thank you so much, ma'am!<b>Brigid:</b> Thank you so much, ma'am!phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12585028301233488892011-07-21T17:35:02.650-04:002011-07-21T17:35:02.650-04:00A really entertaining read with sparkling dialogue...A really entertaining read with sparkling dialogue, I really enjoyed this one.Brigid O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08646687391409208367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25786999635048752922011-07-21T12:35:21.823-04:002011-07-21T12:35:21.823-04:00SzélsőFa: Thanks for the kind words. Yes, they wer...<b>SzélsőFa:</b> Thanks for the kind words. Yes, they <b>were</b> in fact, talking about the photo.<br /><br />Well, I'd like to think the story itself...was the red herring?<br /><br /><b>Precie:</b> Thank you! Your piece was brilliant as well..<br /><br /><b>Deb Smythe:</b> :) Thank you so much.phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81056004080339793012011-07-21T09:55:30.349-04:002011-07-21T09:55:30.349-04:00Ha! Good twist. I too was expecting a murder myste...Ha! Good twist. I too was expecting a murder mystery.Deb Smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10990130480508998598noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42087808007157434052011-07-21T07:27:37.324-04:002011-07-21T07:27:37.324-04:00What fun! I feel for poor Nagu, but the dialogue ...What fun! I feel for poor Nagu, but the dialogue Is great, and I enjoyed how your story unfolded.Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52754061206462628572011-07-21T06:26:00.724-04:002011-07-21T06:26:00.724-04:00i wonder though what the 'red herring' in ...i wonder though what the 'red herring' in this particular story was...SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40604532774158018592011-07-21T06:21:57.808-04:002011-07-21T06:21:57.808-04:00i liked how well Nagaraj (Nagu) is characterized s...i liked how well Nagaraj (Nagu) is characterized simply by his (her?) words. i tend to think they are talking about the prompt photo ;)SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62688971313286910562011-07-21T00:50:27.446-04:002011-07-21T00:50:27.446-04:00Aerin: Thanks! :)<b>Aerin:</b> Thanks! :)phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76219926417770475952011-07-21T00:49:33.970-04:002011-07-21T00:49:33.970-04:00Aimee LaineOf course..thanks for reading
Dottie H...<b>Aimee Laine</b>Of course..thanks for reading<br /><br /><b>Dottie</b> Haha..that works well too. Thanks for your comment.<br /><br /><b>Erratic Thoughts:</b> Thanks, u were great too :)<br /><br /><b>Krunal:</b> Thanks so much, sir. :)phaticharhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01458914636112852499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21971575674698579072011-07-21T00:47:01.781-04:002011-07-21T00:47:01.781-04:00OH this made me giggle. I was seriously expecting...OH this made me giggle. I was seriously expecting a police procedural. Too funny. I love the dialogue and the characterizations. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-50965155346640141432011-07-21T00:31:56.465-04:002011-07-21T00:31:56.465-04:00hilarious....somehow reminded me of the cop and hi...hilarious....somehow reminded me of the cop and his assistant in Appu Raja. Superb.Krunalhttp://www.thewakefultree.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55240587128944809712011-07-20T23:07:13.791-04:002011-07-20T23:07:13.791-04:00"Escape to Eternity"!
Excellent work...a..."Escape to Eternity"!<br />Excellent work...as always :)Erratic Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14852558150033296079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37604343565782453432011-07-20T18:54:37.906-04:002011-07-20T18:54:37.906-04:00It's so hard to buy art for someone else, but ...It's so hard to buy art for someone else, but I think I would have chosen "Escape for Eternity" just like the sound of it, lol. Nice.<br /><br />Dottie :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08688849410604429533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48318891251679780332011-07-20T15:51:51.041-04:002011-07-20T15:51:51.041-04:00An the interpretation of art. Everyone has their o...An the interpretation of art. Everyone has their own opinion. :)Aimee Lainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201246474625590886noreply@blogger.com