tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2286687201355947436..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #142Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6122868086499692842009-07-29T21:40:21.205-04:002009-07-29T21:40:21.205-04:00Your writing is so vivid. I really liked this piec...Your writing is so vivid. I really liked this piece and think it begs to be expanded. Excellent job.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4887204555611324862009-07-27T09:57:51.777-04:002009-07-27T09:57:51.777-04:00Brutal story. The violence grabbed me. I couldn&...Brutal story. The violence grabbed me. I couldn't look away.<br /><br />High marks for entertainment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23148199744493570902009-07-20T17:03:10.733-04:002009-07-20T17:03:10.733-04:00I love the passion of this. I found your use of l...I love the passion of this. I found your use of language sensuous and enthralling. A fine piece of writing.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82153728433164845232009-07-19T11:53:47.925-04:002009-07-19T11:53:47.925-04:00Ditto to Aerin on Dittoing Laurel and making it so...Ditto to Aerin on Dittoing Laurel and making it sound like a mean job. :D<br /><br />I like the take on Indian mythology here.<br /><br />Reminded me of George Clooney shouting with rage in Michael Clayton "I'm Shiva, The god of Death" :)Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63211813032425111682009-07-18T09:18:40.139-04:002009-07-18T09:18:40.139-04:00barbaric ending - you did a nice job in painting t...barbaric ending - you did a nice job in painting this picture. yikes! Good job.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89248306071220344372009-07-18T09:18:18.001-04:002009-07-18T09:18:18.001-04:00barbaric ending - you did a nice job in painting t...barbaric ending - you did a nice job in painting this picture. yikes! Good job.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81761946464801930172009-07-18T05:45:42.411-04:002009-07-18T05:45:42.411-04:00ranee: you targeted wellA on first hit! Welcome to...ranee: you targeted wellA on first hit! Welcome to the "club" that Jason fondly created, I truly enjoy myself every time wit' coN test drives:) YLchong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76490493839019494902009-07-17T17:54:37.154-04:002009-07-17T17:54:37.154-04:00Ouch!Ouch!BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-652615282020605852009-07-17T13:41:08.623-04:002009-07-17T13:41:08.623-04:00Thanks y'all, (I think!)--This was my first sp...Thanks y'all, (I think!)--This was my first spontaneous foray into putting my stuff out there for it to be judged by other writers. <br /><br />I'm glad I did, though, because I've thoroughly enjoyed reading so many of the stories and poems. I suddenly feel like I'm part of a community and not just a solitary blogger.<br /><br />JR, Terri, Lauren, Aerin: I really hadn't planned on making it so "savage." The character took over (and that's my story and I'm sticking to it!)<br /><br />Alex, Christina, Rohan, Aditi, Nothingman: Thanks for the appreciation.<br /><br />Laughingwolf: She bit because he hit! I'm in awe of your story, BTW.<br /><br />Blog Gore: Seems we have certain sensibilities in common.<br /><br />RaneeDr. Ranee Kaur Banerjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09915043555307038876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7740337965409766912009-07-17T13:24:06.762-04:002009-07-17T13:24:06.762-04:00I myself am an Indian, also a Bong at that so I ca...I myself am an Indian, also a Bong at that so I can really connect to the whole piece here - I am wow'ed by your amazing skill!aditihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09464870785851270367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26086397489700918902009-07-17T12:44:37.777-04:002009-07-17T12:44:37.777-04:00Bad deeds deserve punishment. In any kind. Anyway....Bad deeds deserve punishment. In any kind. Anyway.<br /><br />Great descriptions.<br /><br />Rock on!<br /><br />NPallavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09597178864833810868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86268891532407330342009-07-17T12:27:38.850-04:002009-07-17T12:27:38.850-04:00LAUREL - QUIT TAKING MY COMMENTS!
Okay, it's ...LAUREL - QUIT TAKING MY COMMENTS!<br /><br />Okay, it's more like Laurel says things perfectly enough that I can't improve on them. So...ditto.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77510151765878002082009-07-16T12:43:47.302-04:002009-07-16T12:43:47.302-04:00Savage, indeed. This piece made me shiver.Savage, indeed. This piece made me shiver.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90327254216403417922009-07-16T07:23:21.396-04:002009-07-16T07:23:21.396-04:00Ranee... this is brilliant...Ranee... this is brilliant...As the Mind Meandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05289502626334651157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22649025159742643882009-07-16T02:23:19.418-04:002009-07-16T02:23:19.418-04:00Whoa!!!
Job well done...what a take..Whoa!!!<br />Job well done...what a take..Rohanhttp://cachememory.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30491696061547046632009-07-15T20:23:00.533-04:002009-07-15T20:23:00.533-04:00This is fantastic. The writing is beautiful but th...This is fantastic. The writing is beautiful but the story is savage. <br /><br />Amazing.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77270436521142396752009-07-15T19:56:43.799-04:002009-07-15T19:56:43.799-04:00I love this line...
looking at the temple on the ...I love this line...<br /><br />looking at the temple on the horizon where yet another sun had been killed, pierced by the spire.Cloveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00864382831898822793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68332151631754060322009-07-15T18:40:59.009-04:002009-07-15T18:40:59.009-04:00Wow, great job
alexWow, great job<br /><br />alexwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36263469210416079252009-07-15T17:21:42.430-04:002009-07-15T17:21:42.430-04:00too late, she already bit!too late, she already bit!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11264575558600553992009-07-15T16:45:16.258-04:002009-07-15T16:45:16.258-04:00Very animalistic. You have some vivid images here....Very animalistic. You have some vivid images here.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.com