tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2328004805392589143..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #114Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49789892542716105852009-07-29T21:50:53.533-04:002009-07-29T21:50:53.533-04:00Amnesia stories are hard to pull off, but you did ...Amnesia stories are hard to pull off, but you did it well. Kudos for not forcing a sappy, happy ending. Great job!Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45626255540910446242009-07-27T08:28:34.940-04:002009-07-27T08:28:34.940-04:00I hope he can hold to that glimmer for a long time...I hope he can hold to that glimmer for a long time. Poignant.<br /><br />High marks for pacing and entertainment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12677764183921890532009-07-23T12:21:45.906-04:002009-07-23T12:21:45.906-04:00So sad. But perhaps a glimmer of hope - a flash of...So sad. But perhaps a glimmer of hope - a flash of remembrance? I wasn't sure if she remembered or not. Lovely. Nice work.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79161961175220558892009-07-20T12:57:21.905-04:002009-07-20T12:57:21.905-04:00Heartbreaking really. I love that even after a ye...Heartbreaking really. I love that even after a year of not a glimmer of recognition, your character is still trying everything. This to me is a mark of true love and it makes the story all the more poignant.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1773585732038525872009-07-18T17:19:06.864-04:002009-07-18T17:19:06.864-04:00Sad, but had a ring of truth to it.Sad, but had a ring of truth to it.Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40679206905949894932009-07-16T18:11:40.707-04:002009-07-16T18:11:40.707-04:00Nothing to say except to echo what's been said...Nothing to say except to echo what's been said before. Heed Amanda F's advice.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76790840228209274132009-07-16T14:36:10.430-04:002009-07-16T14:36:10.430-04:00Life is not always a box of chocolates.Life is not always a box of chocolates.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17807852482822831692009-07-16T08:54:48.175-04:002009-07-16T08:54:48.175-04:00Different. Sad. Left a strange aftertaste for me. ...Different. Sad. Left a strange aftertaste for me. I feel bad for both of them.Ranee Kaur Banerjeehttp://www.raneespoems.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39100445305132018952009-07-15T16:41:53.865-04:002009-07-15T16:41:53.865-04:00Although I really enjoyed the concept behind this ...Although I really enjoyed the concept behind this story, I felt like the flow of the story was a bit on the choppy side. That aside, it was well presented: sad, careful, and loving.Amanda F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11302784595594793121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45833308937994897102009-07-15T15:51:49.972-04:002009-07-15T15:51:49.972-04:00Had she remembered everything after drinking the w...Had she remembered everything after drinking the wine, I would have been so disappointed. But this had the perfect ending to a sad piece.<br /><br />I liked the intention and the idea behind the plot.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46825422005226293792009-07-15T03:14:54.734-04:002009-07-15T03:14:54.734-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.nairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03662580956502298427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61475061311324903372009-07-15T03:13:55.041-04:002009-07-15T03:13:55.041-04:00the swirling wine reminded me of hitchcock's i...the swirling wine reminded me of hitchcock's imagery.. somehow! i like it, its beautiful and sad...nairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03662580956502298427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62382130156215759032009-07-14T19:21:44.849-04:002009-07-14T19:21:44.849-04:00Nice take on the theme -- a different look at the ...Nice take on the theme -- a different look at the effects of the wine. Nice unity in the swirling wine.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57683685541736684362009-07-14T16:41:08.082-04:002009-07-14T16:41:08.082-04:00Wine to remember? I need a bottle of that ;-)
Sad...Wine to remember? I need a bottle of that ;-)<br /><br />Sad but nice one old bean<br /><br /><br />Four DinnersThe Preachermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10224135811862587701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16720289357058028842009-07-14T16:16:00.372-04:002009-07-14T16:16:00.372-04:00Some people drink to forget; other folks want peop...Some people drink to forget; other folks want people to drink so they'll talk. In this flash, it's the latter.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31069786613320056202009-07-14T15:54:09.255-04:002009-07-14T15:54:09.255-04:00There were some really nice parts in this piece. ...There were some really nice parts in this piece. Loved the red swirling in the glass, than later in the sink. Sad...Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69584293228623137632009-07-14T14:21:30.518-04:002009-07-14T14:21:30.518-04:00very good.. Very beautifully woven..very good.. Very beautifully woven..TinTinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08566801390720606117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26210132186307134602009-07-14T13:59:22.298-04:002009-07-14T13:59:22.298-04:00what laurel said...what laurel said...laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16114493304151843132009-07-14T11:33:03.642-04:002009-07-14T11:33:03.642-04:00A poignant story. Love the take on the theme.
A l...A poignant story. Love the take on the theme.<br /><br />A little choppy in the flow, but otherwise well done.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21633764813274304432009-07-14T10:29:14.642-04:002009-07-14T10:29:14.642-04:00Really romantic, sad take on the "truth in wi...Really romantic, sad take on the "truth in wine" concept. I love the notion that he gives her the wine to make her remember, not forget.<br /><br />Romantic and sad.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.com