tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post262910743816090684..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #15Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74836151714271061032008-07-23T23:37:00.000-04:002008-07-23T23:37:00.000-04:00I liked the chilling touch in the end. I imagine ...I liked the chilling touch in the end. I imagine many deaths are like that. The moment before was so comfortable and taken for granted. Good pacing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2922423677450148862008-07-23T14:15:00.000-04:002008-07-23T14:15:00.000-04:00More shows? Is he immortal?Sounds like a fun way ...More shows? Is he immortal?<BR/><BR/>Sounds like a fun way to go-- if one is ready to go!<BR/><BR/>Very creative story!Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85081901837843566732008-07-20T00:18:00.000-04:002008-07-20T00:18:00.000-04:00This brought back memories of my childhood where a...This brought back memories of my childhood where another dare devil attempted to jump 13 Pepsi Trucks with his heavy motorcycle. The television warned us children not to "try this at home," and we ignore it, jumping our bicycles over an open pit. As for endorsements, we drank Towne Club soda instead.<BR/><BR/>Nice working story.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81085584277987579092008-07-19T20:28:00.000-04:002008-07-19T20:28:00.000-04:00oh, a good one!oh, a good one!laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55256069324678568992008-07-17T01:32:00.000-04:002008-07-17T01:32:00.000-04:00fabulous imagery! i could see it all in my head!!fabulous imagery! i could see it all in my head!!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29043953573920301492008-07-15T08:51:00.000-04:002008-07-15T08:51:00.000-04:00I used to love Eval Knieval when I was a kid, and ...I used to love Eval Knieval when I was a kid, and by extension, Arthur Fonzerelli. Nice original take on the photo.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-79200409411447539212008-07-14T07:44:00.000-04:002008-07-14T07:44:00.000-04:00Very descriptive... Good job. -RitaVery descriptive... Good job. -RitaMy crazy lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05631522969768435267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30382513359823723802008-07-13T19:22:00.000-04:002008-07-13T19:22:00.000-04:00Yeah, I get it, but it took me a while - well and ...Yeah, I get it, but it took me a while - well and that you explained it. I think Beth understood it all though.24crayonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07171296576635888502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60209486328332046522008-07-13T13:22:00.000-04:002008-07-13T13:22:00.000-04:00Thank you all for your kind comments!Thank you all for your kind comments!Parabolisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15626544847023612125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64708770262538245492008-07-12T22:03:00.000-04:002008-07-12T22:03:00.000-04:00Beautiful last line! We're hanging in the air with...Beautiful last line! We're hanging in the air with him. :)<BR/><BR/>I'm with Beth--this is a great interpretation of the photo, with a very clever title. The dialogue felt authentic, as did the details. <BR/><BR/>Great job!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11478564583716450822008-07-12T19:02:00.000-04:002008-07-12T19:02:00.000-04:00Fresh and Original. Nice approach. Good writing ...Fresh and Original. Nice approach. Good writing - good story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39975046102916331852008-07-12T16:39:00.000-04:002008-07-12T16:39:00.000-04:00Nice work, Ronald. Great imagery. I imagined mysel...Nice work, Ronald. Great imagery. I imagined myself there...and I love your ending. I kept wondering if he'd make the jump....and he did, to "eternity" -- great word to end with.<BR/>Good job.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73943288816230394902008-07-12T12:20:00.000-04:002008-07-12T12:20:00.000-04:00I really like your take on the photo. Very clever...I really like your take on the photo. Very clever.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-86974529230488078492008-07-12T11:06:00.000-04:002008-07-12T11:06:00.000-04:00Very well blended dialogue.Very well blended dialogue.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46379618428222031972008-07-12T10:25:00.000-04:002008-07-12T10:25:00.000-04:00Pure EVEL. BWahahahahahahahaha.LOVE the action.Pure EVEL. BWahahahahahahahaha.<BR/><BR/>LOVE the action.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15629979186333999192008-07-12T05:29:00.000-04:002008-07-12T05:29:00.000-04:00So if Craig is the New Guy - is there an Old Guy a...So if Craig is the New Guy - is there an Old Guy at the bottom of the chasm?<BR/><BR/>Lots of atmosphere here Ronald. Tremendous circus feel. The 'busy-ness' of the pre-show machinations and excitement is palpable. Enjoyed it!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-41668933519111438382008-07-12T05:24:00.000-04:002008-07-12T05:24:00.000-04:00Very well described.The end was a surprise!Very well described.The end was a surprise!Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.com