tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2640488043924254728..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #35Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10704962630043781172008-07-24T16:49:00.000-04:002008-07-24T16:49:00.000-04:00A lot of characterization in there. The element a...A lot of characterization in there. The element at the end with the siren was so good! Great job. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25406607115548501352008-07-19T23:28:00.000-04:002008-07-19T23:28:00.000-04:00beautifully written, leaves me wanting a lot more....beautifully written, leaves me wanting a lot more....laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-76907782232075462932008-07-19T22:44:00.000-04:002008-07-19T22:44:00.000-04:00It seems he enjoys a little attention? :) Good fo...It seems he enjoys a little attention? :) Good for him to enjoy something new. Fun read.Missyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638784910676212171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27980080490650362882008-07-19T21:04:00.000-04:002008-07-19T21:04:00.000-04:00Beautiful writing and imagery here, from the unrav...Beautiful writing and imagery here, from the unravelling black ribbon to the neighbor's cat watching him eat. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39592456240962423432008-07-18T02:42:00.000-04:002008-07-18T02:42:00.000-04:00i really enjoyed this!i really enjoyed this!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59211971836042876332008-07-16T16:40:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:40:00.000-04:00Nothing gets the blood pumping better than to rev ...Nothing gets the blood pumping better than to rev it up and get pulled over.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-50078111005614322962008-07-16T12:02:00.000-04:002008-07-16T12:02:00.000-04:00Very nice. There was a time I thought 60 was old.....Very nice. There was a time I thought 60 was old....it's not! I'm so glad he realized this and still has the chance to hit that speedometer a few more years...heck, I drive 80 frequently. <BR/>Hooray for the birthday boy. I like him. And hooray for you. Nice job.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12025484352963694162008-07-16T04:27:00.000-04:002008-07-16T04:27:00.000-04:00Hi all, Thank you so much for your kind and encour...Hi all, <BR/>Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging comments. <BR/>Keep the writing going.<BR/><BR/>Go shine, <BR/>JoanitaBeingtheBeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11403785145128396266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36544818233541493232008-07-16T03:51:00.000-04:002008-07-16T03:51:00.000-04:00left me wondering and contemplate on my 35 right n...left me wondering and contemplate on my 35 right now....nice very niceralivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18436320884472025853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33071917099857442862008-07-15T17:30:00.000-04:002008-07-15T17:30:00.000-04:00It's never too late to live a little in the fast l...It's never too late to live a little in the fast lane is it? A really uplifting tale of a life re-awakened. It made me smile broadly.<BR/><BR/>Very nice.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25352251780570160382008-07-15T17:26:00.000-04:002008-07-15T17:26:00.000-04:00I was getting nervous for him towards the end, but...I was getting nervous for him towards the end, but he came out fine and unhurt. I liked your awesome take on the photo.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26039267331773783522008-07-15T09:53:00.000-04:002008-07-15T09:53:00.000-04:00And many happy returns of the day!Nice story from ...And many happy returns of the day!<BR/>Nice story from prompt.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52125494611657058702008-07-15T09:15:00.000-04:002008-07-15T09:15:00.000-04:00Nice take on the picture.Nice take on the picture.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16130795705995600282008-07-15T07:22:00.000-04:002008-07-15T07:22:00.000-04:00Great writing as usual. I love the visualization....Great writing as usual. I love the visualization. -RitaMy crazy lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05631522969768435267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65401257979867927602008-07-14T22:32:00.000-04:002008-07-14T22:32:00.000-04:00I loved this. Hooray for his awaking, a little la...I loved this. Hooray for his awaking, a little late, but still in time. I especially loved, and could relate to, He saw the car come up the slope in the rear-view mirror. <BR/>'He smiled. <BR/><BR/>He heard the sirens.<BR/>To him they sounded like ‘Happy Birthday to You’.'<BR/><BR/>Excellent message and excellent writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88943735158457443872008-07-14T19:47:00.000-04:002008-07-14T19:47:00.000-04:00I was cheering for him as the speedometer crept hi...I was cheering for him as the speedometer crept higher. :) Great interpretation.<BR/><BR/>Sometimes we need to push our limits to still feel alive. I love that he was speeding toward 61, instead of limping along. <BR/><BR/>This one made me feel good. Well done!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48590849818579009872008-07-14T18:23:00.000-04:002008-07-14T18:23:00.000-04:00Very nice. It show that at no matter what age it i...Very nice. It show that at no matter what age it is never to late to LIVE or try something new. <BR/><BR/>Enjoyable read<BR/><BR/>alexwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34769111042041720652008-07-14T17:29:00.000-04:002008-07-14T17:29:00.000-04:00Made me smile.His joy and excitement is almost pal...Made me smile.His joy and excitement is almost palpable.<BR/><BR/>Neatly done!Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.com