tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post2966201715134612310..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #20Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66778784505975833062007-11-21T10:54:00.000-05:002007-11-21T10:54:00.000-05:00The high intensity end was well structured. Of co...The high intensity end was well structured. Of course, a difficult topic. All too real. Well done.<BR/><BR/>High marks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75273511148907654362007-11-19T00:37:00.000-05:002007-11-19T00:37:00.000-05:00Excellent.Excellent.Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8459549272291415012007-11-10T19:06:00.000-05:002007-11-10T19:06:00.000-05:00Very tight. Well done.Very tight. Well done.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40217050541616430622007-11-09T20:12:00.000-05:002007-11-09T20:12:00.000-05:00Cool, intense and nicely written.Cool, intense and nicely written.wrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64182820035427963292007-11-09T14:37:00.000-05:002007-11-09T14:37:00.000-05:00This is really good. I like how you took something...This is really good. I like how you took something tranquil and transformed it into something horrific and topical. Your dialogue and descriptions were excellent ("bright red mist", wow). Very much enjoyed this one.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com