tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3116235206450295011..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #9Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3028295604742302092009-07-24T17:57:06.674-04:002009-07-24T17:57:06.674-04:00Standing there must have been like waiting for exe...Standing there must have been like waiting for execution. The emotion was well done. High marks for pacing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37248570713560277442009-07-20T05:32:57.514-04:002009-07-20T05:32:57.514-04:00Love the simplicity you said it with. Well done!Love the simplicity you said it with. Well done!Soniahttp://www.hourlongmoments.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27126955528195757282009-07-20T02:57:34.588-04:002009-07-20T02:57:34.588-04:00As Talk Talk once sang - Baby - Life's what yo...As Talk Talk once sang - <i>Baby - Life's what you make it</i><br /><br />I'm a firm believer in taking the positives out of every situation. Nice upbeat ending Sury.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13134228438180598982009-07-16T11:57:13.101-04:002009-07-16T11:57:13.101-04:00I appreciate the 'blessing in disguise' th...I appreciate the 'blessing in disguise' theme - so often this is only perceivable in hindsight.Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66427713323854424802009-07-15T14:19:57.181-04:002009-07-15T14:19:57.181-04:00Surviving and living are two different things - Th...Surviving and living are two different things - That just randomly popped to me when I read this.<br /><br />I see people struggling due to the recession lately. Hope that this turns to be a blessing to them all.<br /><br />Nice read :)Gughanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10369044715853545060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37113307644883936192009-07-15T01:30:11.387-04:002009-07-15T01:30:11.387-04:00Hi All,
Thanks a lot for your kind words.This is ...Hi All,<br /><br />Thanks a lot for your kind words.This is my first attempt at writing and all your comments have given me a lot of confidence.<br /><br />Sury.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06629778594850183236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51070474381059367372009-07-13T16:59:33.720-04:002009-07-13T16:59:33.720-04:00I have found that most blessings arrive in disguis...I have found that most blessings arrive in disguise, as do many curses. One needs only the proper attitude to distinguish truth.PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25199725223579891852009-07-12T05:50:54.991-04:002009-07-12T05:50:54.991-04:00Some loser!!! Nice one old bean.
er...got any vac...Some loser!!! Nice one old bean.<br /><br />er...got any vacancies? ;-)<br /><br />Four DinnersThe Preachermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10224135811862587701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2642014735657055182009-07-12T00:46:48.070-04:002009-07-12T00:46:48.070-04:00Losing is in the eye of the beholder. He won, in t...Losing is in the eye of the beholder. He won, in the end. Good job.Sarah Laurensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09252565450452195395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87011520307028363782009-07-10T09:25:36.568-04:002009-07-10T09:25:36.568-04:00Simplicity of the narration makes this one stand o...Simplicity of the narration makes this one stand out.Rohanhttp://cachememory.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38179141389075631192009-07-09T17:35:36.881-04:002009-07-09T17:35:36.881-04:00I like, "I went home a loser."
I also l...I like, "I went home a loser."<br /><br />I also like how the protagonist wins in the end. Made me smile.Theresehttp://shoeism.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80035514568982526282009-07-09T17:14:53.760-04:002009-07-09T17:14:53.760-04:00Here in Detroit we know all too well about corpora...Here in Detroit we know all too well about corporate downsizing. I've been shopping around a flash-fiction piece of my own relating to this topic. Nice set-up with the wine.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21458705137831463042009-07-09T13:24:46.752-04:002009-07-09T13:24:46.752-04:00what I love is the simplicity :) good efforts:)what I love is the simplicity :) good efforts:)Kunjalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15346731417236906278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23284184719691605512009-07-09T11:46:58.663-04:002009-07-09T11:46:58.663-04:00Of the moment. Well done, a good story.Of the moment. Well done, a good story.Tessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233122532137654099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37088307892949841452009-07-09T11:18:22.807-04:002009-07-09T11:18:22.807-04:00Good things come wrapped in painful packages somet...Good things come wrapped in painful packages sometimes. Nice story.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58326269184611192442009-07-09T11:03:05.398-04:002009-07-09T11:03:05.398-04:00Just coming off of unemployment, I can relate well...Just coming off of unemployment, I can relate well to this. One always needs a bit of hope to hang on to.JRVogthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501549592361240370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19178127479544017012009-07-09T10:40:03.882-04:002009-07-09T10:40:03.882-04:00Reminded me of the Pixar story.
In current testi...Reminded me of the Pixar story. <br /><br />In current testing times, I guess many would relate to this.<br /><br />Nicely done.Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-14864638882253705082009-07-09T09:34:27.627-04:002009-07-09T09:34:27.627-04:00turnaround is such sweet revenge :)turnaround is such sweet revenge :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44182661410452508122009-07-09T09:25:07.080-04:002009-07-09T09:25:07.080-04:00Excellent! I love the "wine laughing at me in...Excellent! I love the "wine laughing at me in a very sarcastic way."<br /><br />I also like the opportunity created from something the protaganist was so afraid might happen.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8646153114674385542009-07-09T09:07:02.551-04:002009-07-09T09:07:02.551-04:00A timely topic--unfortunate for so many. I wonder...A timely topic--unfortunate for so many. I wonder if this really happened to someone you know?<br />I could feel the discomfort at the party. Nicely done!Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.com