tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post346772126051631300..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #16Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26104829136036835762007-08-07T21:23:00.000-04:002007-08-07T21:23:00.000-04:00Second half was great. Loved the real dialog and ...Second half was great. Loved the real dialog and funny interaction. I could totally see it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27420635474805453532007-08-03T22:25:00.000-04:002007-08-03T22:25:00.000-04:00What a different take on the forest. Somehow I do...What a different take on the forest. Somehow I don't expect smores were packed either...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-90000472381801343382007-08-03T10:00:00.000-04:002007-08-03T10:00:00.000-04:00Therese and Paul - Thanks so much.Ann - Wow, I'm h...Therese and Paul - Thanks so much.<BR/><BR/>Ann - Wow, I'm honored to be one of your votes. Hearing that feels like winning. Thank you.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9728955200430078012007-08-03T07:58:00.000-04:002007-08-03T07:58:00.000-04:00Every time I enter one of these, I like to tell th...Every time I enter one of these, I like to tell the writers I voted for I voted for them and sometimes why. You obviously procured one of my votes. I love a simple story that feels like truth. One that doesn't read like a writer labored over every line, but is just giving a snapshot of every day life. Plus, this was genuinely funny! Great job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61959456612335177302007-08-02T22:14:00.000-04:002007-08-02T22:14:00.000-04:00Very nice and funny piece. It really does describ...Very nice and funny piece. It really does describe camping quite well. Extra credit for being funny.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69212734728563924572007-08-02T21:30:00.000-04:002007-08-02T21:30:00.000-04:00Ha ha ha!I like your style. I am practically itchy...Ha ha ha!<BR/><BR/>I like your style. I am practically itchy imagining the bugs. <BR/><BR/>Great piece.Thérèsehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05925229457609377645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88590404133937459872007-08-02T16:41:00.000-04:002007-08-02T16:41:00.000-04:00I appreciate you all reading and commenting. This...I appreciate you all reading and commenting. This was a fun piece for me to write.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44600777549626953732007-08-02T15:36:00.000-04:002007-08-02T15:36:00.000-04:00Harsh!Harsh!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62519766081807998702007-08-02T11:43:00.000-04:002007-08-02T11:43:00.000-04:00Great story and I love the 'wicked laughter' at th...Great story and I love the 'wicked laughter' at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78263729735590556782007-08-01T15:11:00.000-04:002007-08-01T15:11:00.000-04:00hee-hee. I loved this, especially that you worked ...hee-hee. I loved this, especially that you worked in a metaphor relating contempt with smores! Nicely written all around.<BR/><BR/>Great job!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18094692246737160502007-08-01T09:06:00.000-04:002007-08-01T09:06:00.000-04:00oh that was so cool!oh that was so cool!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23912363504137144432007-08-01T03:41:00.000-04:002007-08-01T03:41:00.000-04:00Oh very wicked - and wickedly funny. A very entert...Oh very wicked - and wickedly funny. A very entertaining story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15666711950467812902007-07-31T14:28:00.000-04:002007-07-31T14:28:00.000-04:00I'm glad the consensus is that it is actually funn...I'm glad the consensus is that it is actually funny. Thank you for your comments.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-31661064508822763102007-07-31T11:28:00.000-04:002007-07-31T11:28:00.000-04:00funny one that engages. good job!funny one that engages. good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51363425671323785452007-07-30T22:23:00.000-04:002007-07-30T22:23:00.000-04:00Cute story and well written. Thanks for the chuckl...Cute story and well written. Thanks for the chuckles.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28327406624783617402007-07-30T16:02:00.000-04:002007-07-30T16:02:00.000-04:00Before children, this could be a snapshot of campi...Before children, this could be a snapshot of camping with my husband. Really loved this. Great laugh at the end.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-10796097212844308982007-07-30T14:47:00.000-04:002007-07-30T14:47:00.000-04:00I've been on this trip, so the fierce eye rolling ...I've been on this trip, so the fierce eye rolling was easy for me. A very entertaining read, Hoodie.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11037008993846765692007-07-29T21:00:00.000-04:002007-07-29T21:00:00.000-04:00thank you, everyone, for your comments and kind wo...thank you, everyone, for your comments and kind words. this is why i enter.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34896177031994799372007-07-29T13:38:00.000-04:002007-07-29T13:38:00.000-04:00Funny story. i always like when the punchline has...Funny story. i always like when the punchline has something to do with poop. Maybe I shouldn't have admitted to that.Anthony Rapinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581208296144295224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40208267071535565542007-07-28T21:24:00.000-04:002007-07-28T21:24:00.000-04:00(oops... is it wrong to say your favorite...? I j...(oops... is it wrong to say your favorite...? I just thought of that...)<BR/><BR/>Angelique<BR/><BR/>(contrite, if necessary!)The Quoiblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632853309100258560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38085150949711980742007-07-28T21:22:00.000-04:002007-07-28T21:22:00.000-04:00I have to admit this is my fave thus far... and I ...I have to admit this is my fave thus far... and I submitted one earlier! :) <BR/><BR/>You just really cracked me up on this one. Nice work!<BR/><BR/>AngeliqueThe Quoiblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632853309100258560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44104723108390895302007-07-28T16:25:00.000-04:002007-07-28T16:25:00.000-04:00Love it! A great snapshot of married life.Love it! A great snapshot of married life.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-82977353812333230202007-07-28T14:55:00.000-04:002007-07-28T14:55:00.000-04:00Very funny indeed - when I reached the suggestion ...Very funny indeed - when I reached the suggestion that the sleeping bags might be zipped together, I laughed.<BR/>And I am married:)SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89063695556987578472007-07-28T12:01:00.000-04:002007-07-28T12:01:00.000-04:00Victor, takoda - thanksMy husband says that if you...Victor, takoda - thanks<BR/>My husband says that if you can't picture it you must not be married. ;)Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12833575043057714362007-07-28T11:12:00.000-04:002007-07-28T11:12:00.000-04:00Thought it was funny also. But had trouble visuali...Thought it was funny also. But had trouble visualizing "fierce roll of the eyes." ;-)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.com