tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3613865598588073390..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Simplicity: Intimate LoveJason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53606373718399462102008-02-18T17:53:00.000-05:002008-02-18T17:53:00.000-05:00Thanks, Terri. :)Thanks, Terri. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72563805562456407752008-02-16T11:39:00.000-05:002008-02-16T11:39:00.000-05:00Hey "anonymous"-- what makes you think it isn't fi...Hey "anonymous"-- what makes you think it isn't fiction?!<BR/>;)Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21178039522019336942008-02-16T10:13:00.000-05:002008-02-16T10:13:00.000-05:00Yup, hot. Very hot.Yup, hot. Very hot.Terrihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03158421102740382411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7194259750368177002008-02-16T09:54:00.000-05:002008-02-16T09:54:00.000-05:00Hey Matron of Honor!Three Mile Island?Yes, that's ...Hey Matron of Honor!<BR/><BR/>Three Mile Island?<BR/><BR/>Yes, that's a great description. Meltdown. But in a good way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80380615611228296822008-02-15T19:43:00.000-05:002008-02-15T19:43:00.000-05:00TMI!!! TMI!!!Glad you two are so...um...close thes...TMI!!! TMI!!!<BR/><BR/>Glad you two are so...um...close these days :)<BR/><BR/>~ Matron of Honor and proud friendAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53006893734350297722008-02-15T11:00:00.000-05:002008-02-15T11:00:00.000-05:00Jude, thanks. :) It's fun to fog up the windows ...Jude, thanks. :) It's fun to fog up the windows once in a while.<BR/><BR/>Ello, ha! You definitely get the prize for the most fun comment! :D I have this image of you looking around to make sure no one is noticing your, um, condition. Oh my. :)<BR/><BR/>Rel, thanks! I hope your Valentine's Day was lovely also.<BR/><BR/>Bernita, thanks, my friend. I debated about keeping that line in there. I'm glad I did. I think it provided just enough "sigh" factor.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53512669502021734562008-02-15T07:14:00.000-05:002008-02-15T07:14:00.000-05:00"He floated in the vicinity of dreams."The most be..."He floated in the vicinity of dreams."<BR/>The most beautiful line of all.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75752568862859352092008-02-14T17:26:00.000-05:002008-02-14T17:26:00.000-05:00Jason and Aine,Sumptuous poem spreading warmth thr...Jason and Aine,<BR/>Sumptuous poem spreading warmth through-out. Nicely detailed.<BR/>Happy Valentines Day!<BR/>relrelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09030572981830789370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80083334800194367292008-02-14T14:19:00.000-05:002008-02-14T14:19:00.000-05:00Jason! I was sitting in a Barnes and Nobles and it...Jason! I was sitting in a Barnes and Nobles and it wasn't my tea that was making me hot! Oh my Goodness! I think I needed a warning with that post. "DON'T READ IN PUBLIC PLACES! WILL TURN YOUR FACE BRIGHT RED AND HOT AND MAKE YOU RUSH HOME FOR A COLD SHOWER!"<BR/><BR/>Phew! Trying not to die! Awesome ending - absolutely fitting!Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67805922696405254562008-02-14T12:34:00.000-05:002008-02-14T12:34:00.000-05:00Oo Mr Evans, you steamy person. This was a very se...Oo Mr Evans, you steamy person. This was a very sensual piece. Beautifully written. Lots of lovely onomatopoeia! Enjoy Valentine's Day- sure you will!Judehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121286194338647357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67751811169533797862008-02-13T23:44:00.000-05:002008-02-13T23:44:00.000-05:00And most importantly, a very special thanks to Ain...And most importantly, a very special thanks to Aine. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55757729839867493722008-02-13T23:43:00.000-05:002008-02-13T23:43:00.000-05:00Hoodie, I'm glad this inspired some, um, feelings....Hoodie, I'm glad this inspired some, um, <I>feelings</I>. I especially thank you for the kind words. :)<BR/><BR/>Paisley, I was hoping to capture a little of that wonderful transcendence intimacy inspires.<BR/><BR/>Angelique, I hope you put your inspiration to good use!! And thanks so much for the fun on your blog. It really made our day.<BR/><BR/>Szelsofa, crazy feels good now and then. ;)<BR/><BR/>Vesper, I really wanted to portray a mutuality and the particular forms of sensuality which inspires each of them. The italics seemed like a nice way to pull the two together. And to build the pace (and heat).<BR/><BR/>Anti-Wife, I hear you. None of us need that kind of distraction at work. ;) Sorry about that.<BR/><BR/>Sarah, you're no stranger to inspiring a little heat under the collar on your blog. Time to make my own contribution. ;) Seriously, I did want to approach intimacy and sensuality head on without losing the emotion and meaning and power behind it. I'm glad I was able to walk the line without tripping into simple, graphic erotica.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44904661565531052942008-02-13T23:16:00.000-05:002008-02-13T23:16:00.000-05:00I'm so glad everyone is enjoying this post! We've...I'm so glad everyone is enjoying this post! We've noticed the decrease in blog traffic this evening... perhaps there's a connection??? <BR/>;)Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88035826206619735892008-02-13T16:12:00.000-05:002008-02-13T16:12:00.000-05:00Wow. And I'm listening to "Bewitched, Bothered, an...Wow. And I'm listening to "Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered". Very appropriate. ;)<BR/><BR/>It's not easy to write erotic material and have it rise to real intimacy. But you achieved that here. Giving, and receiving. Loved the two points of view. <BR/><BR/>I hope you guys have a great Valentine's Day! Somehow, I think you will. ;)<BR/><BR/>Off to take a cold shower...Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70110748749407089542008-02-13T14:43:00.000-05:002008-02-13T14:43:00.000-05:00Whey! It IS hot in here. You need to warn us nex...Whey! It IS hot in here. You need to warn us next time. I shouldn't read this kind of thing at work! That was absolutely lovely and very sensual.The Anti-Wifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33587234562471327982008-02-13T14:24:00.000-05:002008-02-13T14:24:00.000-05:00Jason:Your beautiful version of this story inspire...Jason:<BR/><BR/>Your beautiful version of this story inspired me to write a non-so-pretty or romantic one of my own. Hope you get a chuckle...<BR/><BR/>AngeliqueThe Quoiblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632853309100258560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49152414952981285562008-02-13T11:54:00.000-05:002008-02-13T11:54:00.000-05:00Wow! Beautiful, this "vicinity of dreams"...Great ...Wow! Beautiful, this "vicinity of dreams"...<BR/>Great idea the combination of straight text and italics, including the last sentence...<BR/><BR/>Happy Valentine's Day, Aine and Jason!Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21468921343073097662008-02-13T10:52:00.000-05:002008-02-13T10:52:00.000-05:00one word:steam.You guys are crazy. In a good way.one word:<BR/><BR/>steam.<BR/><BR/>You guys are crazy. In a good way.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63588702034399380822008-02-13T10:21:00.000-05:002008-02-13T10:21:00.000-05:00Jason & Aine:This hot story prompted me to give yo...Jason & Aine:<BR/><BR/>This hot story prompted me to give you an award. Head over to Recess to Writers to find out what it is!<BR/><BR/>AngeliqueThe Quoiblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632853309100258560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67646726121949010542008-02-13T09:37:00.000-05:002008-02-13T09:37:00.000-05:00My face is red. ;)Awesome! I need a cold shower!...My face is red. ;)<BR/><BR/>Awesome! I need a cold shower!<BR/><BR/>AngeliqueThe Quoiblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632853309100258560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66255506955294339532008-02-13T09:34:00.000-05:002008-02-13T09:34:00.000-05:00that was hot... what an excellent expression of in...that was hot... what an excellent expression of intimacy.. it was visual and intense in every way... bravo!!paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44797820511327324442008-02-13T09:17:00.000-05:002008-02-13T09:17:00.000-05:00Gulp. My, is it hot in here or what?Beautifully se...Gulp. My, is it hot in here or what?<BR/><BR/>Beautifully sensual. Tastefully done and amazingly written.<BR/><BR/>Happy Valentines Day to the both of you as well!Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.com