tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3630766395956026988..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #52Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57366221817019794502008-07-24T17:05:00.000-04:002008-07-24T17:05:00.000-04:00It's settled. Picking up hitchhikers on a bike is...It's settled. Picking up hitchhikers on a bike is a bad idea. Very well paced and written. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51119413081148688302008-07-20T16:19:00.000-04:002008-07-20T16:19:00.000-04:00Very poignant piece with an icy twist.Well done!Very poignant piece with an icy twist.<BR/><BR/>Well done!Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25606746043866377682008-07-19T21:39:00.000-04:002008-07-19T21:39:00.000-04:00Fast-moving and engrossing read. I didn't expect t...Fast-moving and engrossing read. I didn't expect the twist at the end. Nice job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54460369041501660342008-07-18T07:47:00.000-04:002008-07-18T07:47:00.000-04:00I always suspected that Destiny could be cruel. I ...I always suspected that Destiny could be cruel. I see that I was right.Posol'stvo the Medvedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00573435137467134333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30513703340498151692008-07-17T15:47:00.000-04:002008-07-17T15:47:00.000-04:00Hi laughingwolf, sarah and missy. Thanks for taki...Hi laughingwolf, sarah and missy. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment! And, missy, the answer is 'both' ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75444756289368724572008-07-16T21:45:00.000-04:002008-07-16T21:45:00.000-04:00I love that "Destiny" is her only word. Is she ut...I love that "Destiny" is her only word. Is she uttering her name or her explanation? Great inner and outer tale.Missyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638784910676212171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56138058088892288372008-07-16T19:54:00.000-04:002008-07-16T19:54:00.000-04:00A moment's temptation with deadly consequences. I ...A moment's temptation with deadly consequences. I found it particularly poignant, as Scott said, that he was about to come around. <BR/><BR/>Great use of her name, too. Very readable, with a taut, chilling end. Nice work!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39096484365833055042008-07-16T19:35:00.000-04:002008-07-16T19:35:00.000-04:00can't escape her, for sure....can't escape her, for sure....laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88095711965238987802008-07-16T19:09:00.000-04:002008-07-16T19:09:00.000-04:00Thanks all for your kind comments!CatherineThanks all for your kind comments!<BR/>CatherineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6841580269789733372008-07-16T18:01:00.000-04:002008-07-16T18:01:00.000-04:00Christine - I particularly enjoyed the narrative a...Christine - I particularly enjoyed the narrative as an internal dialogue. We see all the action and his reaction to it. I'm sad that Mike's realisation that he loved Jenna too much to cheat never was spoken but it made for great reading,JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32074363109840371672008-07-16T17:12:00.000-04:002008-07-16T17:12:00.000-04:00Icy touch.Icy touch.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13195255796515454482008-07-16T16:48:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:48:00.000-04:00Hitchhikers always make great reads; they're so un...Hitchhikers always make great reads; they're so unpredictable.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21203371014793425682008-07-16T16:43:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:43:00.000-04:00Goes to show, even giving a little into temptation...Goes to show, even giving a little into temptation can ruin your life...or in this case, take it.<BR/><BR/>good reading.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73266505945305881072008-07-16T16:04:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:04:00.000-04:00It was a test, and he failed. Doh! And to think ...It was a test, and he failed. Doh! And to think he was going to do the right thing. Nice easy read this.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48044846707438326932008-07-16T16:00:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:00:00.000-04:00What a great reminder to appreciate and not abuse ...What a great reminder to appreciate and not abuse the things we truly love. Glad you didn't go for the werewolf or zombie solution. This is so much more thought provoking. I enjoyed the read.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12150744935921843170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66725893794665356502008-07-16T14:42:00.000-04:002008-07-16T14:42:00.000-04:00No one can escape destiny. So we must appreciate w...No one can escape destiny. So we must appreciate what we have, when we have, for however long that we have it. What an eloquent way to evoke thoughts.J.C. 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