tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post3820188654320167137..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #39Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69604867356472027392007-04-30T21:58:00.000-04:002007-04-30T21:58:00.000-04:00I like it! Turned the obsession against him. Poe...I like it! Turned the obsession against him. Poetic justice.<BR/><BR/>High marks for pacing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84287357036567147292007-04-29T01:28:00.000-04:002007-04-29T01:28:00.000-04:00Wonderfully punchy writing. The food descriptions ...Wonderfully punchy writing. The food descriptions were almost too icky to read!Fran Piperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08177027484914337117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29552226371087085542007-04-25T23:46:00.000-04:002007-04-25T23:46:00.000-04:00Best line about milk since Neil Simon in the Odd C...Best line about milk since Neil Simon in the Odd Couple ("His refrigerator has been broken for two weeks. I saw milk standing in there that wasn't in a bottle." Nice way to tie in the rotting in the kitchen with the festering disease of an abusive relationship. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-24503736383437883722007-04-25T12:04:00.000-04:002007-04-25T12:04:00.000-04:00Spectacular writing with a nice back door entry in...Spectacular writing with a nice back door entry into the abusive relationship.<BR/><BR/>Very impressive.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2645045354946103252007-04-25T11:15:00.000-04:002007-04-25T11:15:00.000-04:00This reminds me of that Julia Roberts film -- "Sle...This reminds me of that Julia Roberts film -- "Sleeping With the Enemy." Always made me glad I was the neat freak in the family.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18332688726128224142007-04-25T07:09:00.000-04:002007-04-25T07:09:00.000-04:00You broke the mold here. Most attach sanitary obs...You broke the mold here. Most attach sanitary obsession with the wife. <BR/><BR/>Nice descriptions.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42291416001913362232007-04-24T22:58:00.000-04:002007-04-24T22:58:00.000-04:00Excellent descriptions that will keep me from eati...Excellent descriptions that will keep me from eating the rest of the night. <BR/><BR/>"Sunbathing to a perfect curdle"???<BR/><BR/><BR/>shuddddderrrrr!<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.com