tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4298044137431614813..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #12Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-70181926327864984012007-11-21T10:29:00.000-05:002007-11-21T10:29:00.000-05:00Oh man, great dude moment! This actually happened...Oh man, great dude moment! This actually happened to my father, but his collarbone was broken on a far less gutsy play.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53217292627930829862007-11-14T11:36:00.000-05:002007-11-14T11:36:00.000-05:00Just in time for Turkey Bowls! I'm so glad he wen...Just in time for Turkey Bowls! I'm so glad he went for it. This is great, Paul.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11515680059281094182007-11-12T18:10:00.000-05:002007-11-12T18:10:00.000-05:00You are right that it is not too dramatic, which i...You are right that it is not too dramatic, which is why it works so well. You develop two characters, a relationship and a full story in a very complete way in 250 words. Great example of single-pointed meditation for your ending.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72968787433404588932007-11-12T08:21:00.000-05:002007-11-12T08:21:00.000-05:00Thanks everybody. Not too dramatic, I guess, but ...Thanks everybody. Not too dramatic, I guess, but this is what I thought of when I saw this picture. Pickup football games on a cold autumn night, though if I tried playing now I might end up like this guy in the story. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-47079571319599604572007-11-10T19:05:00.000-05:002007-11-10T19:05:00.000-05:00As a football fan, I really appreciated this piece...As a football fan, I really appreciated this piece.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62398009311049014692007-11-09T13:46:00.000-05:002007-11-09T13:46:00.000-05:00Wow--so now I know who struggling writer is!! It's...Wow--so now I know who struggling writer is!! <BR/><BR/>It's not dramatic, but it doves very well with the picture. Autumn and football.<BR/><BR/>I liked it.Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81121407221182588342007-11-09T09:22:00.000-05:002007-11-09T09:22:00.000-05:00And the pains of chasing your dreams, however old ...And the pains of chasing your dreams, however old they are.JRVogthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501549592361240370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9963548583837372442007-11-09T03:34:00.000-05:002007-11-09T03:34:00.000-05:00oh, the pains of growing up ...:)oh, the pains of growing up ...:)SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36211303715502743432007-11-09T01:06:00.000-05:002007-11-09T01:06:00.000-05:00I was expecting something a little more dramatic a...I was expecting something a little more dramatic at the end. Good story.Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12153878171712341666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3919285902552586562007-11-08T22:15:00.000-05:002007-11-08T22:15:00.000-05:00Of course it was worth it! :) Liked this premise, ...Of course it was worth it! :) Liked this premise, and particularly the last line.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com