tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4582742244295791207..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #24Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89955884601218307632009-07-24T18:14:15.433-04:002009-07-24T18:14:15.433-04:00Boy, these guys are not going to win awards for th...Boy, these guys are not going to win awards for their acting! A flavor in legend, indeed.<br /><br />Welcome to The Forties Club!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17181502876430388092009-07-20T15:44:14.014-04:002009-07-20T15:44:14.014-04:00This is awesome - great humor, and the writing car...This is awesome - great humor, and the writing carries the reader along quickly while reading. Nicely done.Jade L Blackwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15321787298101881675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69790599225453325262009-07-19T19:36:31.505-04:002009-07-19T19:36:31.505-04:00Very funny. I like the way you led us down one pa...Very funny. I like the way you led us down one path and then changed the scenery. Nicely done.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68781496920165798612009-07-19T07:20:05.814-04:002009-07-19T07:20:05.814-04:00After a second reading, I'd just like to say, ...After a second reading, I'd just like to say, "This has commercial appeal."JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20294247791841819602009-07-18T14:57:38.398-04:002009-07-18T14:57:38.398-04:00Nicely done. Loved it!
TaraNicely done. Loved it!<br /><br />TaraAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58611327050408715432009-07-16T11:44:48.546-04:002009-07-16T11:44:48.546-04:00Great and funny. I love it.Great and funny. I love it.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75371403562924436252009-07-15T13:24:26.934-04:002009-07-15T13:24:26.934-04:00HAH! Well done, Paul.HAH! Well done, Paul.Amanda F.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11302784595594793121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7521419940050397742009-07-14T14:01:45.347-04:002009-07-14T14:01:45.347-04:00A home run, Paul. Very funny, indeed.A home run, Paul. Very funny, indeed.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21831717355167606952009-07-14T07:32:49.785-04:002009-07-14T07:32:49.785-04:00high noon encounter, wit' grunts, no guns!:) E...high noon encounter, wit' grunts, no guns!:) Enjoyed it tremendousEly:) YLchong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58166298029797696702009-07-14T00:01:27.142-04:002009-07-14T00:01:27.142-04:00Echo Ello!Echo Ello!PJDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-647584504329986812009-07-13T21:44:10.483-04:002009-07-13T21:44:10.483-04:00Love this. Nicely done.Love this. Nicely done.Cloveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00864382831898822793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29730900789600436832009-07-13T13:02:47.976-04:002009-07-13T13:02:47.976-04:00Very good Kool-Aid taster story. :)Very good Kool-Aid taster story. :)BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61758402800417275402009-07-12T10:08:20.797-04:002009-07-12T10:08:20.797-04:00HA! Superbly done. You whipped us along with the ...HA! Superbly done. You whipped us along with the dialogue and then a truly brilliant ending...I was totally taken by surprise.Tessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05233122532137654099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35239178079002658362009-07-11T22:23:20.315-04:002009-07-11T22:23:20.315-04:00LOL! That was so much fun! Great twist!!LOL! That was so much fun! Great twist!!Preciehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071233480999640713noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12018624736796302422009-07-11T09:44:56.528-04:002009-07-11T09:44:56.528-04:00I loved the Princess Bride dialog that led up to t...I loved the Princess Bride dialog that led up to the best ending ever! I want some Kool-Aid now. You really should publish your fun short stories!Lizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02479420775438541054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27740144416367907222009-07-11T08:44:03.135-04:002009-07-11T08:44:03.135-04:00AHAHAHAHAHA! This really made me laugh out loud!!...AHAHAHAHAHA! This really made me laugh out loud!!! Wasn't expecting the ending at all---definitely one of my favorites!!<br />:-)Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732006129353079344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72281637160913810462009-07-10T22:10:14.861-04:002009-07-10T22:10:14.861-04:00Wow Laurel! Thanks :)Wow Laurel! Thanks :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28153486703008859892009-07-10T21:56:56.579-04:002009-07-10T21:56:56.579-04:00This is the only piece I have made that boy I marr...This is the only piece I have made that boy I married read. He is classic middle america white bread demographic...non-fiction only. He loved it!Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36382048371826587872009-07-10T21:30:21.700-04:002009-07-10T21:30:21.700-04:00At first I thought I'd read "red bandana,...At first I thought I'd read "red bandana," but once I got to the end of the story I realized my error. With a 250 word maximum, it would've been hard to do, but wouldn't it have been interesting to have their dialogue stray a bit from the script? Still, very original.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6018103096347340242009-07-10T15:55:49.317-04:002009-07-10T15:55:49.317-04:00Fantastic! And am I way off base in considering th...Fantastic! And am I way off base in considering the sombrero to be a clue that this is some sort of Mexican standoff?<br /><br />Loved it.Laurelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06120847492230531939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3585282759151339762009-07-10T15:13:56.884-04:002009-07-10T15:13:56.884-04:00Brilliant job, Paul - really like this one - love ...Brilliant job, Paul - really like this one - love the neat twist in the tail! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-983438754124149052009-07-10T13:49:38.020-04:002009-07-10T13:49:38.020-04:00Thanks every body. I'm glad you all liked it. ...Thanks every body. I'm glad you all liked it. <br /><br />Ello - I have a twisted mind..<br /><br />Aerin - does this kill my built-in I'm too tired excuse?<br /><br />Therese - :)<br /><br />Aimee - watch it, artificial banana flavor is one of the worst substances created by man :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64152788385279401592009-07-10T13:45:46.819-04:002009-07-10T13:45:46.819-04:00Loved that I laughed out loud! Kool aid is the bes...Loved that I laughed out loud! Kool aid is the best! Especially red banana! ;)Aimee Lainehttp://www.aimeelaine.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62818278149108509142009-07-10T13:31:17.651-04:002009-07-10T13:31:17.651-04:00Gave me good laughs.
Its a much tougher task to a...Gave me good laughs.<br /><br />Its a much tougher task to accomplish, to be funny in just the right kind of way. Or so I beleive. :)Aniket Thakkarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311954967682696734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64952027308857242092009-07-10T12:56:41.793-04:002009-07-10T12:56:41.793-04:00Ha! I loved this! I love how you take yourself so ...Ha! I loved this! I love how you take yourself so seriously, but then... nah, you don't take yourself seriously after all.<br /><br />Really, this left a smile on my face. I really love it. Great piece.Theresehttp://shoeism.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com