tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4636661672110930082..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #105Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-88436504746935003432009-01-20T22:41:00.000-05:002009-01-20T22:41:00.000-05:00Great job with pacing, storytelling, and voice!Tha...Great job with pacing, storytelling, and voice!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for being a wonderful part of the contest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-37584947578851187932009-01-19T02:31:00.000-05:002009-01-19T02:31:00.000-05:00ohhh....so beautiful. So sad but beautiful. I love...ohhh....so beautiful. So sad but beautiful. I loved it. <BR/>You pulled at heartstrings with this one. <BR/>It was great.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21203484638941880672009-01-18T19:22:00.000-05:002009-01-18T19:22:00.000-05:00Beautiful story of hope! janaBeautiful story of hope! <BR/><BR/>janabluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7006196989852161912009-01-17T19:44:00.000-05:002009-01-17T19:44:00.000-05:00Heartfelt, inspired story, Tiffany, in spite of th...Heartfelt, inspired story, Tiffany, in spite of their murky future. His desire for something to come back for is overpowering. I'm glad he seized the moment, in spite of his terror. <BR/><BR/>Lovely writing, too. I liked your poignant take very much.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-35797682320732166362009-01-16T20:33:00.000-05:002009-01-16T20:33:00.000-05:00Very nice! Sometimes we just need something to li...Very nice! Sometimes we just need something to live for-- a connection to tether us. I feel hopeful for him.Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-67912410375719779802009-01-16T17:06:00.000-05:002009-01-16T17:06:00.000-05:00Those were the days, eh? When your birthday could...Those were the days, eh? When your birthday could mean your death sentence. Well written and poignant.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51304918680598337252009-01-16T14:55:00.000-05:002009-01-16T14:55:00.000-05:00Tiffany, I agree that your first paragraph is espe...Tiffany, I agree that your first paragraph is especially wonderful. This piece flows really nicely. My favorite line is, "The air rushed out of his lungs and he hadn’t been able to fill them since." The reference to the Vietnam War caught me off-guard and was a poignant reminder of our repeated human history. Good work!Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17075596786647102438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9464087157636313432009-01-15T14:07:00.000-05:002009-01-15T14:07:00.000-05:00Hope can work miracles.Hope can work miracles.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-5353766840550410942009-01-15T03:52:00.000-05:002009-01-15T03:52:00.000-05:00I feel for him. He seem so real. Being a deployed...I feel for him. He seem so real. Being a deployed (many times) Marine wife, I have a spot in my heart for those leaving loved ones.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16152109956953206862009-01-15T03:06:00.000-05:002009-01-15T03:06:00.000-05:00Love can do miracles and the will to survive throu...Love can do miracles and the will to survive through the war is sure one of them. Good work here!Lenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09787400183444796423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87525541807706543302009-01-15T00:41:00.000-05:002009-01-15T00:41:00.000-05:00Wonderfully evocative first para.Wonderfully evocative first para.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23869074298460915132009-01-14T21:44:00.000-05:002009-01-14T21:44:00.000-05:00This was wonderful! So much told in such a little ...This was wonderful! So much told in such a little bit of space.Jennershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08044537551139633301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-61178656710771928922009-01-14T19:59:00.000-05:002009-01-14T19:59:00.000-05:00hope is to be cherished...hope is to be cherished...laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45965788037126465012009-01-14T16:04:00.000-05:002009-01-14T16:04:00.000-05:00Awww!That was so touching.Love can do miracles.Wel...Awww!That was so touching.<BR/><BR/>Love can do miracles.Well done :)Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.com