tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4740313109940029022..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #52Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66361110628466384582007-05-02T21:45:00.000-04:002007-05-02T21:45:00.000-04:00The romance novel motif comparison was a nice engi...The romance novel motif comparison was a nice engine for the piece. A good deal of characterization was accomplished in a short space.<BR/><BR/>Very high marks overall!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-81577602578005128632007-04-29T10:28:00.000-04:002007-04-29T10:28:00.000-04:00It's interesting that you've captured within your ...It's interesting that you've captured within your story... how story (in this case romance novels) allow us to escape our reality for a while.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1169994071566847232007-04-28T17:15:00.000-04:002007-04-28T17:15:00.000-04:00I really enjoyed this one as well. Really liked th...I really enjoyed this one as well. Really liked the 'now I just read my paperbacks while buddy dreams' line like someone else said. I DO think I would go with "his dad knows less than either of us" instead of "less than both of us combined", but other than that I liked it a lot. Nice work.<BR/><BR/>BDbriliantdonkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05159881776835603748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8254328558039628952007-04-26T11:11:00.000-04:002007-04-26T11:11:00.000-04:00Wow, I'm getting more intimidated with each entry....Wow, I'm getting more intimidated with each entry.<BR/><BR/>Masterful.Jonihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18109855683749612076noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-74088295184505028312007-04-26T09:37:00.000-04:002007-04-26T09:37:00.000-04:00"Now I just read my paperbacks and fall asleep whi..."Now I just read my paperbacks and fall asleep while Buddy dreams."<BR/><BR/>Man, I wish I had written that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20381032112205056492007-04-26T09:14:00.000-04:002007-04-26T09:14:00.000-04:00I am a dreamer too, but I couldn't squeeze such an...I am a dreamer too, but I couldn't squeeze such an reverie into such compactful telling!:) Welldone, do you want to wake up now?chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-54319890733828599212007-04-25T22:58:00.000-04:002007-04-25T22:58:00.000-04:00You did so much with so few words. I'm especially ...You did so much with so few words. I'm especially impressed with your ability to fit so much character in such a short piece.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-28164231450081931092007-04-25T21:47:00.000-04:002007-04-25T21:47:00.000-04:00I, too, went with someone who didn't have a proble...I, too, went with someone who didn't have a problem with it. Great character and story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com