tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4858737627712155012..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #30Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-77478932573758304572007-11-21T11:03:00.000-05:002007-11-21T11:03:00.000-05:00A harsh story of sacrifice. The running was well ...A harsh story of sacrifice. The running was well written. I was rooting for him.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19221266225891580832007-11-19T00:26:00.000-05:002007-11-19T00:26:00.000-05:00This was truly excellent. I think you did an incre...This was truly excellent. I think you did an incredible job in such a short passage of telling a powerful story.Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19920015191201035322007-11-14T07:44:00.000-05:002007-11-14T07:44:00.000-05:00Powerful, and the words sink in even on first read...Powerful, and the words sink in even on first read. I'll come back for second helping as I think I did not get "it" all. Well executed like the sacrifice.chong y lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10365847893009738913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51603363392398903092007-11-12T21:58:00.000-05:002007-11-12T21:58:00.000-05:00Very well done and emotional.Very well done and emotional.The Anti-Wifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02027321787352577548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-32681529001378607092007-11-12T14:42:00.000-05:002007-11-12T14:42:00.000-05:00Strong theme, full of action that left me both wis...Strong theme, full of action that left me both wishing for the man's survival, yet honoring his sacrifice.JRVogthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501549592361240370noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-84577012876438360432007-11-12T14:13:00.000-05:002007-11-12T14:13:00.000-05:00Stunning concept and follow through. "...and hot m...Stunning concept and follow through. "...and hot metal slugged him in the back, twisting him around and down." Beautiful, and gut-wrenching. <BR/><BR/>You did so much with such a small frame. One of my favorites, for sure.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83263644045455746122007-11-12T13:51:00.000-05:002007-11-12T13:51:00.000-05:00Cherrybomb took the words right out of my fingerti...Cherrybomb took the words right out of my fingertips!Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62230665389233442272007-11-12T13:16:00.000-05:002007-11-12T13:16:00.000-05:00I love the connection between the rescuer's creaky...I love the connection between the rescuer's creaky limbs and the tree limbs. Great way to make it come alive.cherrybombhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00983740680050456018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20833025628197526362007-11-12T13:03:00.000-05:002007-11-12T13:03:00.000-05:00Very powerful.Very powerful.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71406625469711631402007-11-12T11:52:00.000-05:002007-11-12T11:52:00.000-05:00Very well written. To sacrifice oneself is amazing...Very well written. To sacrifice oneself is amazing. A powerful storywrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.com