tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4927592696644789879..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #53Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42973338703187901622007-11-21T16:47:00.000-05:002007-11-21T16:47:00.000-05:00A curious and memorable ending. It gives a dark t...A curious and memorable ending. It gives a dark tinge to the story. Effective!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-23541046480400536082007-11-19T08:02:00.000-05:002007-11-19T08:02:00.000-05:00Very good story! I find the briefness of the sente...Very good story! I find the briefness of the sentences very suitable to convey the cold despair and sense of finality.Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62012988969773262112007-11-19T00:39:00.000-05:002007-11-19T00:39:00.000-05:00Oooh, I liked this alot! Well done!Oooh, I liked this alot! Well done!Ello - Ellen Ohhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18311917335471167591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21970870508219723912007-11-17T01:52:00.000-05:002007-11-17T01:52:00.000-05:00His despair is palpable. Very sad, very effective...His despair is palpable. Very sad, very effective, very well-written.rainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04258822737734173873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63455823003591163562007-11-16T21:43:00.000-05:002007-11-16T21:43:00.000-05:00This is a bit macabre for my taste, but I really e...This is a bit macabre for my taste, but I really enjoyed it nonetheless!<BR/>Great writing, and a lot of story within a short space. Kudos.Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36746810744261085362007-11-16T18:11:00.000-05:002007-11-16T18:11:00.000-05:00Very well done. I love the tail detail.Very well done. I love the tail detail.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8182578461195209052007-11-15T20:34:00.000-05:002007-11-15T20:34:00.000-05:00Thank you all for reading. I look foward to readin...Thank you all for reading. I look foward to reading all the stories this weekend.Victor Bravo Monchego, Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251479110131293284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-48189544702892953692007-11-15T11:55:00.000-05:002007-11-15T11:55:00.000-05:00I'm with Sarah at the "cold package" line. It's j...I'm with Sarah at the "cold package" line. It's just a great one.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52636122841339669602007-11-15T10:56:00.000-05:002007-11-15T10:56:00.000-05:00So glad you made it to the party. The story is fl...So glad you made it to the party. The story is flawless. You never disappoint, Vic. It even has a fable-like feel. Perhaps the moral lesson could be: getting tail gets tail."Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-21022170804349141232007-11-15T07:40:00.000-05:002007-11-15T07:40:00.000-05:00Very surprising unveiling at the end. "The cold pa...Very surprising unveiling at the end. "The cold package sat on a plastic chair..." gave me a little chill. You were able to pack a lot of history between these characters into a short space, and yet still leave some mystery.<BR/><BR/>Very engaging read!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com