tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post4933860466945071367..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #56Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69150357468850203942008-03-06T09:38:00.000-05:002008-03-06T09:38:00.000-05:00How could she have not known? Love so often overlo...How could she have not known? Love so often overlooks the details. Perhaps now she'll learn to see others as they are, not as she wants them to be. I feel for her disappointment. <BR/><BR/>Nice storytelling!Ainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08402176500997528105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-53883253013929745682008-03-04T16:42:00.000-05:002008-03-04T16:42:00.000-05:00A bitter disappointment at the end for her. Well ...A bitter disappointment at the end for her. Well told!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78158221379686909912008-03-02T05:37:00.000-05:002008-03-02T05:37:00.000-05:00@bluesugar- thnks so much! :)@bluesugar- thnks so much! :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353823072805304712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-52492046650468530192008-03-01T22:43:00.000-05:002008-03-01T22:43:00.000-05:00Searching...a story about longing and being unfulf...Searching...a story about longing and being unfulfilled. I like how it's not just a human condition; the tree, too, searches. Nicely done.bluesugarpoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14775769108087898456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-762742578589018122008-02-29T06:52:00.000-05:002008-02-29T06:52:00.000-05:00Thanks all.paisely-she wasnt in touch and didnt kn...Thanks all.paisely-she wasnt in touch and didnt knw, i gues... :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353823072805304712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-33980505917533059772008-02-28T20:31:00.000-05:002008-02-28T20:31:00.000-05:00very nice.. i wonder how it is she never knew...very nice.. i wonder how it is she never knew...paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51979264167652474382008-02-28T18:25:00.000-05:002008-02-28T18:25:00.000-05:00Great job kept reader intriquedGreat job kept reader intriquedwrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27319358975400297182008-02-28T08:23:00.000-05:002008-02-28T08:23:00.000-05:00This is beautifully done, PureSunshine. You hold ...This is beautifully done, PureSunshine. You hold the reader close to the story the whole way through so that by the end, one feels the disappointment as keenly as the character does. Really well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-55535162668292631562008-02-28T07:27:00.000-05:002008-02-28T07:27:00.000-05:00what a painful surprise and disappointment. I lik...what a painful surprise and disappointment. I like the natural feeling to it, and the way she handles the truth.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-85155680389140955152008-02-28T05:43:00.000-05:002008-02-28T05:43:00.000-05:00*cud not*cud notAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353823072805304712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-75048606115555821352008-02-28T05:42:00.000-05:002008-02-28T05:42:00.000-05:00@bernard, @marcia-glad u liked it@sarah-isn't real...@bernard, @marcia-glad u liked it<BR/><BR/>@sarah-isn't real life so much like this. Unexpected.<BR/><BR/>@aerin-i think she did not have a choice. Rebelling wudnt help. Moreover, i dont think she cud express so much in 250 words, right jason? ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353823072805304712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46344527746756642212008-02-27T16:41:00.000-05:002008-02-27T16:41:00.000-05:00I'm so, so sorry, but I had to giggle when she saw...I'm so, so sorry, but I had to giggle when she saw his cassock. I think I could do that because you wrote her so well, in that she wasn't devastated. Good, strong, woman, disappointed, and she's going to move on. Great!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-62535382046810774602008-02-27T15:25:00.000-05:002008-02-27T15:25:00.000-05:00Oh, what a devastating conclusion! I really felt h...Oh, what a devastating conclusion! I really felt her eagerness, and that disappointment. <BR/><BR/>Nicely written, puresunshine. :)Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34605163407287650962008-02-27T12:43:00.000-05:002008-02-27T12:43:00.000-05:00This is a great story. I like the detail that she ...This is a great story. I like the detail that she let the ring slip away.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7729797256580603662008-02-27T12:06:00.000-05:002008-02-27T12:06:00.000-05:00Enjoyable read.Enjoyable read.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29956228422044033582008-02-27T12:04:00.000-05:002008-02-27T12:04:00.000-05:00@jlb-thanks so much. I often talk to myself. Wrote...@jlb-thanks so much. I often talk to myself. Wrote about it on my blog too. It was the most natural thing i could write<BR/><BR/>@beth-thanks beth<BR/><BR/>@veggies-:) :) :) THANK u!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17353823072805304712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78531303314292913352008-02-27T11:44:00.000-05:002008-02-27T11:44:00.000-05:00This was one of my favorites. Great story!This was one of my favorites. Great story!Geraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51794038503270713262008-02-27T10:02:00.000-05:002008-02-27T10:02:00.000-05:00Nicely done.Nicely done.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66941329798107901532008-02-27T09:55:00.000-05:002008-02-27T09:55:00.000-05:00I like how this piece stretches out a moment of re...I like how this piece stretches out a moment of realization in the company of a tree. I love how so many folks have incorporated conversations with trees in their stories! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com