tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5043811762933582790..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #64Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9356291418305522992008-07-24T17:15:00.000-04:002008-07-24T17:15:00.000-04:00Yep. The economy pack of diapers on the back. It...Yep. The economy pack of diapers on the back. It's funny, but not funny too. Very real. Given time, unhappiness always grows. High marks overall.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-56862546808516189202008-07-21T04:27:00.000-04:002008-07-21T04:27:00.000-04:00I liked how easily this flowed, and the twist at t...I liked how easily this flowed, and the twist at the end was just great. I had a good laugh there.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66937345027475372792008-07-19T10:11:00.000-04:002008-07-19T10:11:00.000-04:00This was so much fun. I loved the ending.This was so much fun. I loved the ending.Julie Weathershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725236516593676381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3894799113673080092008-07-18T12:38:00.000-04:002008-07-18T12:38:00.000-04:00don't we all dream at times?brilliantly funny, thi...don't we all dream at times?<BR/><BR/>brilliantly funny, this one.<BR/><BR/>your words and phrases are simply powerful...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-12189670349264329352008-07-18T03:25:00.000-04:002008-07-18T03:25:00.000-04:00bucking frilliant!bucking frilliant!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-73255632556523377922008-07-17T16:18:00.000-04:002008-07-17T16:18:00.000-04:00Ditto on the above comments. Well done.Ditto on the above comments. Well done.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-11684025828152448732008-07-17T15:22:00.000-04:002008-07-17T15:22:00.000-04:00That was a nice,unexpected ending!Well done :)That was a nice,unexpected ending!<BR/><BR/>Well done :)Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-80940030175593051742008-07-17T12:06:00.000-04:002008-07-17T12:06:00.000-04:00this is really a fun read! well-constructed witho...this is really a fun read! well-constructed without giving away too much! i like... :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-63944205888303750872008-07-17T11:44:00.000-04:002008-07-17T11:44:00.000-04:00Ha! Ha! Ha! The difference between our dreams and ...Ha! Ha! Ha! The difference between our dreams and our reality… How ironic! Nicely done.Vesperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417602625059442986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40712560893157407302008-07-17T10:40:00.000-04:002008-07-17T10:40:00.000-04:00My twin toddler nieces live just across the street...My twin toddler nieces live just across the street, so there are four toddlers (mine & hers) in close proximity - and I can tell you - the diaper thing is a BIG deal. GREAT story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-6545296582488143162008-07-17T07:56:00.000-04:002008-07-17T07:56:00.000-04:00Ha! Great twist.Ha! Great twist.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-83548680488259617872008-07-17T06:27:00.000-04:002008-07-17T06:27:00.000-04:00It's wonderful the way just riding a bike can indu...It's wonderful the way just riding a bike can induce all kinds of fantasy. I love the way his Puma-sex-god image of himself gets punctured at the end. Great fun!JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-45166177162174396242008-07-17T02:35:00.000-04:002008-07-17T02:35:00.000-04:00Funny ending. Guess Mr. Tough Guy wasn't so tough ...Funny ending. Guess Mr. Tough Guy wasn't so tough afterall....well, he was for a little while.<BR/>Nice work, Missy.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3092079085872790082008-07-17T00:31:00.000-04:002008-07-17T00:31:00.000-04:00...nice characterization of a new dad acting out h......nice characterization of a new dad acting out his freedom--even if it's only momentary.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71954602565303512272008-07-16T23:15:00.000-04:002008-07-16T23:15:00.000-04:00nice twist, missy :)nice twist, missy :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-66616903346833354082008-07-16T23:11:00.000-04:002008-07-16T23:11:00.000-04:00What a wake-up call! Poor Norm. ;)I liked his tran...What a wake-up call! Poor Norm. ;)<BR/><BR/>I liked his transformation from night predator to whipped husband and dad. You did a really nice job of putting a cold shower on all that swagger. <BR/><BR/>Very sensual writing, with a bit of humor too. Nicely done!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com