tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5066710412884066513..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #66Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72436469210575916252009-01-20T22:10:00.000-05:002009-01-20T22:10:00.000-05:00Great job with pacing, technical skill, and voice!...Great job with pacing, technical skill, and voice! And welcome to the Forties Club!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for being a wonderful part of the contest.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78587511743588161112009-01-19T12:30:00.000-05:002009-01-19T12:30:00.000-05:00Men have become the tools of their tools....nice t...Men have become the tools of their tools....<BR/><BR/>nice take - interesting, and liked the way you associated the mass as sheep <BR/><BR/>good workEsther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-3847728673750346262009-01-18T19:10:00.000-05:002009-01-18T19:10:00.000-05:00Interesting philosophical take. We are trapped int...Interesting philosophical take. We are trapped into our own makings.<BR/><BR/>Dont you also think that once the sheep undertands what is being said - he will become comfortable and start looking for other options....ceedyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17767787593275846653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1625945761758997482009-01-17T08:09:00.000-05:002009-01-17T08:09:00.000-05:00While reading this, I started to feel I was readin...While reading this, I started to feel I was reading a philosophical dissertation, an an interesting one as well. However, I was glad you brought us back in the final part, with him looking for company to ascend to his vision of the world. Tools are a blessing and a curse. If it weren't for computers we wouldn't be having this conversation now would we? Great writing, different take, I liked it.Catherine Viberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01354073276671196477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-13553547004643402582009-01-15T16:10:00.000-05:002009-01-15T16:10:00.000-05:00Strong and original, a very good take on the comp!...Strong and original, a very good take on the comp!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-46997051512586330362009-01-14T19:22:00.000-05:002009-01-14T19:22:00.000-05:00I liked the social comment here. There is such con...I liked the social comment here. There is such conformity in modern life that we are in danger of just being defined by our labour saving devices. I really liked this one!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-7239282869476916972009-01-13T23:37:00.000-05:002009-01-13T23:37:00.000-05:00Wasn't sure this would be too philosophical; not e...Wasn't sure this would be too philosophical; not enough 'story', so I am pleased you've all liked it. Thank you!J.C. Montgomeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05681137099755243041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-78541724308892704752009-01-13T20:27:00.000-05:002009-01-13T20:27:00.000-05:00thought provoking messages here...well writtenthought provoking messages here...well writtenK.Lawson Gilberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11204234196229710524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16914121184263690762009-01-13T18:27:00.000-05:002009-01-13T18:27:00.000-05:00And we become prisoners of the things we wrought t...And we become prisoners of the things we wrought to set us free. I think you've captured the dilemma of progress impeding our evolution beautifully.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-58890892237877741372009-01-13T18:09:00.000-05:002009-01-13T18:09:00.000-05:00ahh, the aimlessness of one more manifested tool.....ahh, the aimlessness of one more manifested tool....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29820609482648199782009-01-13T13:52:00.000-05:002009-01-13T13:52:00.000-05:00I liked your bodhisattva, J.C. His own enlightenme...I liked your bodhisattva, J.C. His own enlightenment is not enough. <BR/><BR/>Nice meditation on modernity and mindfulness. Being too comfortable is sometimes a trap. Good writing, and strong interpretation!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15150570775157581232009-01-13T11:08:00.000-05:002009-01-13T11:08:00.000-05:00Loved the philosophy ingrained in it!Good one :)Loved the philosophy ingrained in it!<BR/><BR/>Good one :)Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68928748451258734622009-01-13T09:21:00.000-05:002009-01-13T09:21:00.000-05:00Entertaining take on the theme.Entertaining take on the theme.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-39577080698804134702009-01-13T07:26:00.000-05:002009-01-13T07:26:00.000-05:00nice portrayal of thoughts...the closing lines wer...nice portrayal of thoughts...the closing lines were great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-64580767336926537442009-01-13T05:51:00.000-05:002009-01-13T05:51:00.000-05:00Another good ending.Another good ending.McKoalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01457446171624585099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-42643363751908543812009-01-13T05:18:00.000-05:002009-01-13T05:18:00.000-05:00i do love this view of an escalator, never seen it...i do love this view of an escalator, never seen it as so mindless before & it's so true!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-71078858743195115652009-01-12T23:53:00.000-05:002009-01-12T23:53:00.000-05:00Your title is right on, but I must confess, I want...Your title is right on, but I must confess, I wanted your narrator to be Amish.JR's Thumbprintshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10479324326541901987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-89867568353784884362009-01-12T22:59:00.000-05:002009-01-12T22:59:00.000-05:00well said, jc... ponderful :)well said, jc... ponderful :)laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.com