tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5218445893071798384..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #42Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25229833070052229682008-07-24T16:54:00.000-04:002008-07-24T16:54:00.000-04:00Freed from depression for a moment only to be snuf...Freed from depression for a moment only to be snuffed out. At least it was a happy moment.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-19177908167027567492008-07-19T23:21:00.000-04:002008-07-19T23:21:00.000-04:00So sweet with the sidecar, and so sad with the une...So sweet with the sidecar, and so sad with the unexpected ending. A fast and memorable read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-25984885600317839942008-07-19T22:13:00.000-04:002008-07-19T22:13:00.000-04:00Yikes. I really liked them. :(I'm impressed how ...Yikes. I really liked them. :(<BR/><BR/>I'm impressed how you created characters I am rooting for so quickly.Missyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16638784910676212171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-9923733889043701302008-07-19T20:25:00.000-04:002008-07-19T20:25:00.000-04:00careful what you wish for....careful what you wish for....laughingwolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08873675614347328116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87776615197960828122008-07-18T12:46:00.000-04:002008-07-18T12:46:00.000-04:00a hauntingly romantic tale! i like it!a hauntingly romantic tale! i like it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29460402041962718002008-07-16T16:26:00.000-04:002008-07-16T16:26:00.000-04:00I think it's safe to say that Camille cured his de...I think it's safe to say that Camille cured his depression.Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13323167263283798566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-29623361063561650182008-07-16T11:31:00.000-04:002008-07-16T11:31:00.000-04:00Oh my, so bittersweet but glad they didn't purpose...Oh my, so bittersweet but glad they didn't purposely drive into a vehicle. I really liked her...and him. So many emotions. You brought them all out nicely. Very well done.Esther Avilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840416881970211377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-20500332957840555302008-07-15T22:01:00.000-04:002008-07-15T22:01:00.000-04:00Bitter sweet story. Well written with a surprise ...Bitter sweet story. Well written with a surprise ending. -RitaMy crazy lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05631522969768435267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51953176955200498932008-07-15T21:42:00.000-04:002008-07-15T21:42:00.000-04:00Hmmmm Maybe I should have killed somebody off in ...Hmmmm Maybe I should have killed somebody off in my sidecar story, too. It seems a bit more satisfying and final-- at least the depression and the constant irritations are over for the young man.<BR/>Good writing.Rusty La Violettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00915199898135003452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69629321275303137982008-07-15T16:49:00.000-04:002008-07-15T16:49:00.000-04:00Hal - you managed to convey the great love between...Hal - you managed to convey the great love between your characters very clearly. Although the ending was sad I found myself feeling glad that they were together and had escaped from the depression that blighted their life together. <BR/><BR/>I felt very involved in their story. Good writing.JaneyVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04951739945670483199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-49069641433102783802008-07-15T16:37:00.000-04:002008-07-15T16:37:00.000-04:00Great dialog that makes the reader really like the...Great dialog that makes the reader really like the characters. Didn't see the end coming, so sad, so ironic. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15237973536401857552008-07-15T15:35:00.000-04:002008-07-15T15:35:00.000-04:00Ouch!Did not expect that :(I echo Sarah about the ...Ouch!Did not expect that :(<BR/><BR/>I echo Sarah about the rebirth thing.<BR/><BR/>Sometimes,life grants wishes in the most ironical way.<BR/><BR/>Beautiful story!Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-68253908174371209742008-07-15T15:18:00.000-04:002008-07-15T15:18:00.000-04:00Nice one.Nice one.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57333654878724987272008-07-15T15:13:00.000-04:002008-07-15T15:13:00.000-04:00Good story.Good story.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-72028692821006509222008-07-15T14:36:00.000-04:002008-07-15T14:36:00.000-04:00Oh, geez...just when I thought he was headed for a...Oh, geez...just when I thought he was headed for a rebirth. Sad, sad ending. <BR/><BR/>I liked the playful, loving dialogue and how determined she was to lift his spirits. At least they died together, and happy. <BR/><BR/>Nicely done!Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.com