tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5504622820235807051..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: DisorientationJason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-91995029642384319312011-08-17T08:55:35.309-04:002011-08-17T08:55:35.309-04:00i liked how you kept the tension growing. yet i fo...i liked how you kept the tension growing. yet i found the ending of the scene somehow funny... :) i expected they woke up or something...SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-69149755085960496142011-08-17T07:43:58.947-04:002011-08-17T07:43:58.947-04:00Mona, it's based on a real moment of disorient...Mona, it's based on a real moment of disorientation. The forest can do strange things to your brain.<br /><br />Kunal, I don't think so....<br /><br />Jackie, so very true! Perhaps the faster one is still jogging.<br /><br />Walking Man, you're right. Running is often just the precursor to getting taking down.<br /><br />Lee, they would have been better off staying home that day.<br /><br />Bruce, I've been lost in the woods more than once. I know what that rise of anxiety feels like. As for the ending, no story element is needed per se. My vision for this piece was a much more dire form of being lost.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-30546723718071948592011-08-16T08:56:19.768-04:002011-08-16T08:56:19.768-04:00The fear of being lost and without direction came ...The fear of being lost and without direction came through so very well as we all have probably been there. Do we really need a "beast" at the end of the story?Bruce Roushnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-8835331256646560462011-08-15T20:21:41.409-04:002011-08-15T20:21:41.409-04:00This would be a good time to have a Hover board!This would be a good time to have a Hover board!Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14126916093660757322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18801046940445206092011-08-15T11:55:39.191-04:002011-08-15T11:55:39.191-04:00I guess they should have never gone into the woods...I guess they should have never gone into the woods without some form of protection yet even though there is an implication of violence, unless it kills one of them then *shrug* it may just be lost and also looking for a way home. <br /><br />Never assume violence until it presents itself and never be unprepared to defend your life when it does. Besides how is one supposed to outrun something that big? Better to stand and take the submissive position until you get your chance to strike.<br /><br />Just a Detroit lesson.the walking manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10058913927297370740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36117955973686718662011-08-15T11:24:58.943-04:002011-08-15T11:24:58.943-04:00In their panicked dash for their lives from the be...In their panicked dash for their lives from the beast, which way do they run - back from where they had come or to an uncertain, unclear destiny? I’d choose the uncertain path ahead and bear in mind that I don’t have to run fast, only faster than my friend.Jackie Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04337167666859961439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-1367898486530492012011-08-15T05:31:13.140-04:002011-08-15T05:31:13.140-04:00Did they ran fast enough? :D
KunalDid they ran fast enough? :D<br /><br />KunalKunalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17801232027548934686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38538483264748833272011-08-15T02:09:54.215-04:002011-08-15T02:09:54.215-04:00O dear! I would hate to be in a situation like tha...O dear! I would hate to be in a situation like that!Monahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615034229525061880noreply@blogger.com