tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post5697205415036104393..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #34Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59332568956998860072007-08-07T21:39:00.000-04:002007-08-07T21:39:00.000-04:00The image of her on the horse and fleeing in the w...The image of her on the horse and fleeing in the woods was strong. I also liked the last line.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-87094016425837438792007-08-02T14:46:00.000-04:002007-08-02T14:46:00.000-04:00Great story start Jennifer, although I got a littl...Great story start Jennifer, although I got a little hung up on the use of Darfur - different associations come to mind for me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4524222818540723832007-08-01T12:20:00.000-04:002007-08-01T12:20:00.000-04:00love it- i could hear everything!love it- i could hear everything!AngelConradiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09423318903817661244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-4238521368241105242007-08-01T07:28:00.000-04:002007-08-01T07:28:00.000-04:00Very nice - would be good to see this idea expande...Very nice - would be good to see this idea expanded into a full length novel!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04871239587214383387noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-40133820511432697402007-07-31T18:56:00.000-04:002007-07-31T18:56:00.000-04:00I agree with Victor. I'd like to see this story ex...I agree with Victor. I'd like to see this story expanded.Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06106410070220667314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-16340082936040745622007-07-31T07:29:00.000-04:002007-07-31T07:29:00.000-04:00This is another i'd like to see expanded. Check th...This is another i'd like to see expanded. Check that first sentenceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-22257954660071887822007-07-31T05:23:00.000-04:002007-07-31T05:23:00.000-04:00Nice choice of genre. Unique in this respect, I th...Nice choice of genre. Unique in this respect, I think.Judehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121286194338647357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-60847664693140719482007-07-31T02:30:00.000-04:002007-07-31T02:30:00.000-04:00I like how the selection of words and expressions ...I like how the selection of words and expressions match the style of the sotry. My fav. was the comparison of the climbing ivy to the fear that gets on the lady.SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.com