tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post6033764975685956393..comments2023-09-22T07:03:03.280-04:00Comments on The Clarity of Night: Entry #8Jason Evanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14851992219298316168noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43880250794492161072007-11-21T10:24:00.000-05:002007-11-21T10:24:00.000-05:00Powerfully written. The dialog was a great tool t...Powerfully written. The dialog was a great tool to get the backstory across. A very good mix here. Vivid and well rounded in technique.<BR/><BR/>High marks.<BR/><BR/>Congratulations on the honorable mention!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-34125957840397956502007-11-19T10:39:00.000-05:002007-11-19T10:39:00.000-05:00Congratulations, Josh!Congratulations, Josh!SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-2435237004346797312007-11-18T00:29:00.000-05:002007-11-18T00:29:00.000-05:00Yes, what Dot said. A little Wm. Gibson in there,...Yes, what Dot said. A little Wm. Gibson in there, too.Victor Bravo Monchego, Jrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251479110131293284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-36437566769735212512007-11-16T11:28:00.000-05:002007-11-16T11:28:00.000-05:00Usually the preachy aspect of why the world is end...Usually the preachy aspect of why the world is ending overtakes an eco-apocolyptic story but not here. You have a smart plot and two fully developed characters. This is great and one of my favorites.Dottie Camptownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00891885810903269126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-18732946337341675542007-11-14T11:49:00.000-05:002007-11-14T11:49:00.000-05:00This one really spoke to me. The language is smar...This one really spoke to me. The language is smart without being pretentious. Excellent work.Hoodiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17616427797201977083noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-27387319645567126112007-11-12T10:19:00.000-05:002007-11-12T10:19:00.000-05:00Wonderful gems you've scattered as you wrote; like...Wonderful gems you've scattered as you wrote; like this one:- 'I remember when sunsets meant romance, not retribution,' and 'new life within me, waking to a dead world'. Great going... Loved it...Abhinavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15760314837510920601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-65482242917710750512007-11-10T19:24:00.000-05:002007-11-10T19:24:00.000-05:00Angela stole my thought. This should be a film.Angela stole my thought. This should be a film.Bethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17335415338155220244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-44766593465719576282007-11-09T01:30:00.000-05:002007-11-09T01:30:00.000-05:00The movie! When does it premier?Good job!The movie! When does it premier?<BR/><BR/>Good job!Angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12153878171712341666noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-51898074225833468332007-11-08T21:48:00.000-05:002007-11-08T21:48:00.000-05:00"Irises shut."Now that's just freaking awesome."Irises shut."<BR/><BR/>Now that's just freaking awesome.The Quoiblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632853309100258560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-17053416046297120302007-11-08T20:26:00.000-05:002007-11-08T20:26:00.000-05:00So many great images. I especially like the last l...So many great images. I especially like the last line. Nicely done.Jaye Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09407478042834459126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-57770415821289735602007-11-08T18:39:00.000-05:002007-11-08T18:39:00.000-05:00I enjoy end of the world tales. You did the very w...I enjoy end of the world tales. You did the very well in such a short amount of wordswrath999https://www.blogger.com/profile/10964105112015979524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-396481226092826672007-11-08T18:23:00.000-05:002007-11-08T18:23:00.000-05:00Very, very nice. Unsettling and creepy. It was a p...Very, very nice. Unsettling and creepy. <BR/>It was a pleasure to read.Chris Eldinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11794946908789120139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-38225289856674347682007-11-08T16:35:00.000-05:002007-11-08T16:35:00.000-05:00Wow I like this one alot. I also loved this line.'...Wow I like this one alot. I also loved this line.<BR/><BR/>''His pale eyes are thumbprint smudges behind the glass panes of his mask.''<BR/><BR/>Very nicely written!Enchanted by Bookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05939494712100587128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-59996461327540795772007-11-08T14:46:00.000-05:002007-11-08T14:46:00.000-05:00Oh, these dystopian sets disturb me...well written...Oh, these dystopian sets disturb me...well written *shivers*SzélsőFahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600289147447182465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-26708559448617109842007-11-08T14:21:00.000-05:002007-11-08T14:21:00.000-05:00Very unsettling, creepy feel to this one, Josh, al...Very unsettling, creepy feel to this one, Josh, along with some great descriptions (love the "pale eyes as thumbprint smudges"). Wonderfully imaginative, and sinister. Very well done.Sarah Hinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13888406261817690010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-15748807509717691132007-11-08T14:06:00.000-05:002007-11-08T14:06:00.000-05:00Excellent style and setting.Excellent style and setting.Bernitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05264585685253812090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-15498010.post-43233042818479036802007-11-08T13:45:00.000-05:002007-11-08T13:45:00.000-05:00I love your use of language in this one, Josh, and...I love your use of language in this one, Josh, and the post-apocalyptic feel. Muy bueno.<BR/><BR/>MirMirtikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04668769199544406582noreply@blogger.com